FF: Khamoshiyaan T2: last part & VM page 66 - Page 18

Awesome Update Kunchu Di..

My dear Kunchu,

First of all, the montage is very nice. Not as hauntingly lovely as some of the others you have done, but then this is for a specfic purpose, and it serves that purpose admirably. I was pleased to see that you have chosen Alok Nath's face for Baba; it is a perfect fit.

Coming to the chapter, I am glad that you have not made Arjun's emotional, as distinct from physical, recovery process too easy. It would not have been realistic if you had done that, it would have been too pat, like a fairy story, where a wand in waved and all is right again.

First, I liked the way in which Shree held out the longest of the three before caving in and taking Arjun back, so to speak. For him to do otherwise would not have been convinicing, for there was bound to be a lot of resentment in his mind vis a vis Arjun, for his sorrow and sense of loss would have been directly proportional to the extent of his hero worship of his khaddoos boss, which seems to have been very high.

It was also very natural that the very thing that brings Shree round, Arjun's mentioning that he had not wanted to come back into their lives iss tharah, also triggers a fit of depression in Arjun, both because of his guilt for his having hurt them so much by his disappearance, and because of his present helpless state.

The temporary reprieve after Aryan case is broached and discussed, followed by further morale boosting with a dose of tender, loving care from Aisha, is unfortunately not enough to cope with the tidal wave of regret and guilt, about what he had condemned Aisha to in those two long years, that cascades over him as he looks at the photos of her and her students dancing.

This guilt is much deeper that what he feels about Shree and the others, for while they had grieved for the loss of a mentor and boss - and seeing this must in a way have been reassuring and heartwarming for Arjun - with Aisha, to whom he owed so much more for all that she had been for him, he could see that he had nearly destroyed her.

You have brought out all these conflicting emotions, both in Arjun and, by extension, in Aisha as well, very sensitively and with perfect empathy.

But this too shall pass, and Aisha, for all her worry of the moment, knows this. The real bedrock on which Arjun will base his recovery, physical but also emotional, will be not just the medicines or the physiotherapy. It will be Aisha - her presence, her courage, her love for him and her determination to give him back his old self. And that cannot fail.

Shyamala Aunty


Hi...
thanks a lot for all your love and comments. Hope to keep up to it in future.
This montage is a long pending request from Aisha. Sorry dear, I kept you waiting.

CHAPTER 44:

Beautifully conveyed story...

I really don't know what to say or my key -board is just jammed.
I'm mesmerized by your ability of playing with human emotions... showed us how two emotions colloid in human minds...how one took over another...& loved the strong lady, Aisha.

Keep writing & thanks for PM.

Awesome update
love it
Cont soon

Awwsssmmm part
beautiful...
cont sooon
thnks for PM

Beautiful Yet Again !!!

Well it brought tears in my eyes di...
Beautifully written
Arisha literally Rocks..
Shree nailed it...
lovely

Hats off..
Amazing banner..
Hugs n love u di..
Happy Diwali ...

aww aman too gud...

😛 Super update dear .
I wondered when I came to know that you are also from Kerala. And that too Calicut.Wow!
You will be thinking how I knew that.My sister is also in this forum-Harsha111.So we are very close.What is your real name?
My Fav story is Har pal. I love Pari so much. She is really very cute.And Yadein, Ek aur zindagi all are awesome. How do you get enough time for writing ,reading,commenting etc?
Update soon . I hope next update of Ek aur zindagi will come in 2 days.Pls make Arakshi together in it.

nice part...

Beutiful update...
Loved his conference with the team...
And I am glad that the team had forgiven him, but I still want him to get a SYS session from them, and specially from Shree...

Oh no, I hope Aisha will be able to do some damage control now, he can't go back to that guilt pit again
Thanks for the PM