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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful👏
loved the way aisha was there for arjun😊 ... and the convo between aman and arjun

Edited by jia03 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely...or I must say beautiful!
Arjun and Aisha bonding is so strong and beautiful that it feels peaceful to read it...
something I feel when i write and read ZMD( i have already told u this)
the couple know each other so well and can read their minds so easily!

I loved Aman-Arjun convo...it was a sort of clearing up as well...now there is no hiding or a secret in Aman's mind which could make him feel guilty...
He has confessed his heart out and also made it clear that it was just a crush to Nadia which has disappeared seeing Mrs Aisha Rawte...

The therapy sessions and the support that Aisha gave him was nicely portrayed

loved it!
cont soon
Edited by vidya.anand - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was awesome update dii.
I loved it.
Speciall the song.
Continue soon.
And thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
Arjun n Amna's first interaction was nice
they could easily start off their talks without any hesitations
Shree,Chotu ,Liza convo with Aisha was nice
loved their teasing n plans to welcome their akdu sir
in his sys way
Baba forcing Aisha to have food reflected his concern n elderly love
Arjun -Aisha moments were superb
loved the way Aisha sat by his side n supported during
the therapy session even Arjun told her to go
as he knew she couldn't see him in pain
but as always she beside him as his strongest support system
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.
Maike se sasural..Loved that part:)
Their wait for each other was well potrayed..already missing eachother.
Arjun and Aman convo too was well written.Their official intro and then Aman's true words..he actually confessed about having crush on her.
Liza, Shree, Chotu convo with Aisha was also good one..they have also missed him a lot.
Then the treatment..the silent promises and support by Aisha was heart touching..
Song was also perfect.
Loved the update..<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome
I really out of words to Rp on ur post...
It was just awesome
Ya I m a dr physiotherapy men Hota hai aisa
Thanx for pm
Waiting nxt
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
this update really gives a proof that ayesha will surely bring back the 'acp rawte' very very soon...
plz continue soon...
thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update once again
glad that Aisha was there for Arjun during the physiotherapy session
loved Amans sweet & honest confession about having a crush on Aisha
would love to see how the famous trio r going to welcome their Akdu Arjun Sir
Arisha
beautiful writing
superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwsssmmm part
lovely
cont sooon
thnks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
My dear Kunchu,

An absolutely lovely, silky,deeply touching piece of writing. One has to have these mood pieces from time to time, in which nothing seems to happen, like the stillness of a very broad river, with the water looking almost stationary. But underneath, deep down, there are strong currents flowing that can suck you in if you are not careful.

It is the same with our couple, especially with Aisha, for it is she who has to beware of being so sucked in by the undertow of emotional deprivation for two endless years of an arid existence. She has to stay afloat so that she can keep Arjun afloat as well. And the way you have drawn your Aisha is wonderfully reassuring. She understands the vital importance of her simply being there, whether it is for him to wake up to, or for him to cling to during the painful massage.She is his pillar of strength, but she also has to be her own as well.

I liked the Arjun-Aman conversation a lot. It was civilised and friendly, and Aman telling him how very much he was missed in the ETF must have been balm to Arjun's soul.

I am sure this reassurance that he has not been forgotten, and is grieved for and still missed, will help the healing process as well, for there is always a psychological element to all treatments. The mind has to push the body.

Shyamala Aunty

PS: I miss the montage!

Hi all... thanks again for all the lovely reviews.
With this chapter I have not moved ahead with the story. Thanks to my Choti, I came across a song and just loved it. So this is the after effect. Hope you like it too.

CHAPTER 43:


Edited by sashashyam - 11 years ago

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