FF: Khamoshiyaan T2: last part & VM page 66

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

princess_pari

@princess_pari

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

nice part di...

loved when arjun acknowledged verma as father...

shree, chotu n liza were truely good/// their care for their boss is amazing...

aisha and arjun... i have no words to describe that..

had tears...

continue soon...

Quote

yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

awesome update
chotu shree and liza are worried
sameer and aman scene was nice
sameer angry
sakshi feeling gulty
really loved arjun and aisha scene
aisha trying her best to be strong in front of arjun
and taking care of him..was lovely
waiting for the team convo
continue soon

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

That was beautiful Kunchu but yes an emotional roller coaster ride that made every1 mum. At the end of this update, I had unshed tears in my eyes. Aisha once again proved that she isn't weak. Hats off to the lady for handling Arjun so maturely. 👏It was highly commendable for boosting Arjun's lost confidence at this point in time wherein he feels he is just a baggage of burden to her. She surprised me when she thanked Saakshi for being there with Arjun & also to bring in to her notice what she was missing. Hearing Aisha, Saakshi might have felt that a big baggage of guilt have been removed from her.

Quote

Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

I was totally pissed off coz we had a power failure of about 28 hrs but Your update has made my day...

You put down each & every character's portion so neatly...
You made me feel every single one's pain...It was brilliant.
loved the way Aisha stood by Arjun & eager to know how Sakshi gonna handle everyone, Specially Rathod...

Keep writing & thanks for PM.

Quote

sashashyam

@sashashyam

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Kunchu dear,

I do not know how I lost track of this one, from my all time favourite among all your writings, and for 8 days? Unbelievable. Anyhow, der aaye, durust aaye.

It is nothing short of perfection, this smooth, almost imperceptible easing back into something as close as at all possible, at this stage, to the original, and unique mutual emotional dependence that was the bedrock of the Aisha-Arjun relationship. This is being done basically by Aisha, who has by now got a firm grip on herself, and on both what she should do and, more important, what she should not do.

I loved the part that goes:

She saw him watching her. She knew its going to be tough. Any second he may go back to I'm a trouble for you' mode. She knew that she should handle him with care.

The old ACP was missing. He looked helpless. That's not acceptable. The first matter on her mind was to bring back the old confidence which he had hidden deep inside. She wanted him back, not only physicaly but also mentally...

Aisha has by now overcome her initial resentment at what all he had made her go thru in 2 long years of torment, made worse by dwindling, but still never really abandoned hope. The hope that some day, somewhere, somehow, she would find him, cheating even the Lord of Death, and be made whole again.

Arjun is like the earth parched by two years of harsh drought, cracked, dry, and both lifeless itself and incapable of nurturing life. But it needs just one blessed shower, of her presence, her love, her caring, her forgiveness, for the banjar zameen of his heart and mind to change, to permit a few tentative shoots of peace and joy to peep out. When he sleeps soundly for perhaps the first time since he emerged from his coma, he has indeed found his way back home.

Lastly, I was pleased that Aisha does not copy the unwarranted and ungracious resentment displayed towards Dr, Varma by Sameer, whereas he should have been profoundly grateful to him. It was good to see her behaving as she should towards Arjun's foster father and saviour

I loved every bit of this chapter, Kunchu. Thank you.

Shyamala Aunty

Hello all, next part of Khamoshiyaan...

thank you for all your lovely comments. It means a lot to me...

CHAPTER 41:

Edited by sashashyam - 12 years ago

Quote

rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

a very beautiful and emotional story... very well written...but plz do pm me once u update... 😃

Quote

Geeta

@Geeta.R

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Sorry di that im so late

The reactions of Arjun, Aisha, Sam, Sakshi and Aman were all so beautifully written

Loved that aisha realised that sakshi brought her here and thanked her it was so touching

And the aisha and arjun reunion was so beautiful and pure that even the adjectives pure and beautiful fall short

Thank you and please continue soon xxx

Quote

JeeLeZaraa

@JeeLeZaraa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

update karo na plz 😊

Quote

Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

kunchu :

commenting on three updates together, it's a huge relief that Arjun has been finally found and restored back to his team, and most importantly to his wife Aisha ..Rathore's anger and frustrations are understandable, hope he forgives Saakshi and Dr.Verma after hearing the entire story. update soon.

Quote

BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

OMG ! I completed reading 1st thread!
So sabko sab pata chal chuka hai! Sam and aisha's behavious towards the duo was truely worth!
And Arjun in that condition! That was also a shock for me!