VIRMAN OS~|| IT WAS NOT JUST ONE NIGHT STAND ||~ updated pg7 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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~NOTE~

hey guys I no u all must be waiting for an update..
but coz of my exams I cannot update any of my stories...
but ya as my next exam is on 16th so I could do it today but seeing d response I dont want to update!!! so till d update gets 50-60 lyks plz dont ask me to update..m sry if m being rude..
but its d condition as m gona update btw my exams..
just for few ppl who love my stories I cannot update so silent readers do lyk nd comment nd ya I can wait till it gets d likes... nd if not then its ok it will not be continued...

nd dis condition is for my every story...

aenna
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*****DISCONTINUED*****

reason read d above note..
Edited by Aenna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Hawww I didnt even knew wen u started dis storyyy
Nd now u r discontinuing it...
Plzz na I really loved its concept it was superbbb
I wana read more plzzz do it na
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishal.lover

Hawww I didnt even knew wen u started dis storyyy
Nd now u r discontinuing it...
Plzz na I really loved its concept it was superbbb
I wana read more plzzz do it na



Sryyy yar plzz I will do it as I will get d no. Of lyks or response I want 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46


I hv already explained d reason on pg 6..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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helloo... finally m here... as my exams r over now... so here is d update...

VIRMAN OS~|| IT Was Not Just One Night Stand ||~

CHAPTER 1 - DAILY DRAMA

SIZE=3]Sun was coming out falling its rays on two beautiful souls who were sleeping peacefully in each other arms not knowing nd caring about d surroundings... d sun rays directly fall on dere fall as d room's window was open.. By getting irritated coz of d light dey started snuggling more into each other now dey were cuddling with each other completely..

"Ummm... salman I luv u too..umm..." d biggest fan of salman khan was again lost in his dreams nd was hugging nd hiding her face closely in d person's chest who was sleeping beside her...

"Umm...what salman... senorita y u always forget my name.." here d other person was again lost in his dream girl..nd hugged d person besides him more tightly...

both of them were hugging each other tightly by thinking of each other as sum1 else...

"Manviii..." sum1 shouted outside d door... nd manvi who was sleeping soundly jerked up from her sleep..

"Arggg what happened to salman's voice..." she opened her eyes slightly nd saw d d person who was hugging her tightly coz of which she cudnt move... nd then she jerked up nd try to come of d grip of d other person .. but d grip was so strong dat she cudnt even move so she shouted..

"Viraaat..." she shouted in his ears nd instead of waking up he pulled her more closure... coz it was d daily drama as in most of d tym he had experienced it so he is not at all affected wid her loud voice...

Umm..senorita.. dont shout otherwise I will make u shut!!" He pulled her completely in his arms in such a way dat her face was just an inch away from him... nd here manvi was shocked nd angry... she then tried to control her anger nd tried to come out of d grip..

Virat..leave me..ahhh..." but dere was no affect on him...now he was getting irritated nd then he spoke naughtily thinking her as sum1 else...

"Fine now I will shut u down" with dis he started coming closure with his eyes still closed nd den his lips were just about to touch hers...wen..

"SMASHHH..." he felt a deep pain on his cheeks..as manvi had slapped him so hard.. dat he jerked up from his sleep nd sat straight on d bed with his hand on his cheeks..

"Manviii what d hell??"

"Dont u dare raise ur voice... u idiot do u no what u were going to do??" [/SIZE](Manvi said angrily pointing finger at him)

"what did I do?? I was just sleeping... nd u stupid spoiled my dream!!!" virat replied angrily facing her.. now dey both were sitting on d bed facing each other )

"Me.. spoiled ur dream!! u..u idiot..pagal na ho toh pata hai kya ho jata abhi.. thnk god mai bach gai!! pata nai kya mu (face) dikhati mai sabko"

SIZE=3]Virat- huh?? pagal ho gai kya aesa kya hua?? I dont remember anything...

Manvi- why wud u remember anything? ? saala pagal senorita ka aashiq meri jaan hi nikaal di...

Virat- oye meri senorita pe na jaiyo... or aesa kya ho gaya ki itna bhadak rai hai... kahi tune mere sath.. hawww (starts checking his clothes nd all inside d blanket)

Manvi -
😲 😡 (shocked nd angry)

Virat- hashhh... thk god sab to theek hai maine sab pehna hai tune bhi...ab kya hua ??

Manvi- kamine insaan kya sapna dekh raha tha huh?? u no u were going to kiss me yuck!!!!!

Virat- oyee sahi baat bol I was going to kiss my senorita not u!! wo to tu pata nai kaha se tapak gai.. or tu bhi kam nai hai u were d one saying salman I luv u nd all... to mai kya krta I got distracted... :v (virat said suppressing his smile)

Manvi- what u got distracted in ur dream??? arggg stupid fool!!! nd by d way mai nai tapki tu tapka mere room me u no wat mom will blast if she will see u here again last tym u no wat a big lecture we got!!

Virat- uff mannu meri jaan relax [putting his hand on her shoulder nishal signature hug ;) ] ab kya kare u no we came late last nyt
after d party.. nd wen I came to drop u to ur room I dont no wen I slept here... its not my mistake!! nd ya I no d lecture which we got last sunday wen ur mom found me here... ufff both our parents got a chance again to bully us wid dere reasons to get us married!!

Manvi- dats y m freaked up here go back to ur room from d balcony ..nd u no u r d idiot ur room is just here next to my balcony so y u always end u here in my room!!

Virat - oh meri "hilli hui item" I told u dat I dont no wen I slept here now close dis topic m going nd be ready for d college...

Manvi - omgg virat I forgot today is d first day of our 3rd year... n m soo excited... new session nd entry of new ppl... eekks n new boys...

Virat- oye new boys ki lagti.. shaant ho ja!! purane ladke kya mar gaye hai jo naye dhund rai hai...

manvi - purane to kitne aaye pr tum unhe mere sath hone do tab na...khud to date pe date jate rehte ho..or mjhe date pe jana to dur ki baat hai khud ki date ki preparation krwate ho huh!!!!

Virat -
hahahah 😆 meri jaan mai hu na tujhe kya jarurat hai date pe jane ki...

😉 Manvi - bas ho gai meri date... tumhe date krne se acha I will find a girlfrend 😛

Virat - haww kamini.. m not dat bad though...

Manvi - ya ya I no what u r.. pehli date hi tumhari bedroom me end hoti hai!!

Virat- hawww nai oye wo to bas ek bar wo bhi dat stupid pooja mixed sumthing in my drink nd firstly I didnt do anything wrong at dat tym also.. we just kissed.. nd for ur kind info m still a virgin!!!! or ye baat kisi ko nai pata chalni chahiye samjhi!!

Manvi - ok ok samjhi but den also its ur record na..virat u kiss every girl on ur first date...

Virat- woh to hai mannu... I hv kissed just 20 girls..

Manvi - just 20 omggg virat think about me...

virat- what!!! manvi plz we r partners how can i kiss u..

Manvi- oye pagal i was saying dat i didnt even went on a date nd here u hv kissed almost 20 girls..

Virat - so what yar.. leave dis but as d other guys i didnt slept wid any girl..

Manvi- omggg breaking news!! oh hello u slept wid me almost umm... cant remember atleast 50 tyms...

Virat- han toh I was speaking about d girls..

manvi - what!!!! uu... (manvi ran after him nd virat ran to balcony nd den to his room nd closed d door after shouting..) "get readyyy byee..."

Manvi- bach gaya aaj..huh!!


"Manviii what r doing..." manvi heard her mom calling..

"oh freak... aayyiii mom..." manvi ran inside d washroom to get ready...


This Was d daily..drama from d beginning of dere college lyf most of dere mornings were lyk dis... now lets see how dere 3rd year of college goes... will there be any change ??? for dat keep reading...

TO BE CONTINUED...

- LUV AENNA
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update yaar...
Love Virman..
Pleaseee update soon..
And thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
love virman nok-jokh
update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Whatt a humurous topic...😆😆
just lik our Nishal in real lyf!!😆😆
plzzz continue soon...dis tym😡
Aenna...😊

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