Virman Collab FF: Games of the Heart ~ Updated Chapter 1

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richa002

@richa002

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Awsome update...
Loved very longg update...
Fight in very first meeting...
Loved manvi's thoughts were funny...
Update soon...

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shaalivirman

@shaalivirman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

OMG...i luved it...awsome writing 👏👏

and exactly...the last part was unexpected...!!!❤️

frst chapter wit a dhamaka...😃

luving it...continu sooonnn...and thnx fr the pm...😊

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Winterbear

@Winterbear

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

loved it!Awesome Start!👍🏼

loved manvi's mini drooling session.

waiting for virat's pov too.

cont soon

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tinni04

@tinni04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

awesome update👏👏. loved it😊 wanna read more update soon.thanks for pm😊

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pink1

@pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

nice update she select for job
and first meeting both are fight and
after that she drooling him
update soon

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Ridzi123

@Ridzi123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

oh! wow..such an amazing update👏

the start was superb...i loved it all⭐️

the way story began...superb😊

and the building n house..oh wow😊

i really loved the house😳...my personal favorite

and the story till now loved it a lot

the first Virman meet was amazing..

the way they both fought

and especially Manvi's thoughts

i really loved the interview part..

and answers to the questions were just amazing..👏

and the next part Manvi drooling on Virat while the interview is going on😆

that was good n the way she was trying to control herself😆

the end😲..never thought something like that

wats happening in the office??😕

really want to know it now..

continue soon and thanks for the pm😃

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Huma

@Huma0301

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Ohhh myyy god!!!!
You guys are just awesomeee
mind blowing update
loved every bit of it
ohhh yesss manvi working with virat
even though as usual they didnt hav a good start
but with virman things end up alright after the start
omg the ending
aaawww virats eyes the last thing she sees
im sooo in love with this
thanx sooo much for pm
plz plz plzzz update quickly
plzzz 😉

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SNTG

@SNTG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

sooo different and sooo interesting and yeah the last scene was unexpected and very proffesional of that lady and maanvi would love to see more of this scenes...continue soon next time :)

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5roseparvin

@5roseparvin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Sorry friend for my very late reply... thank u for pm me... and update is really awesome.. . Now they are going to working together... don't forget to pm me ur future update...