A Late Spring Epilogue// IMP NOTE Pg. 164 - Page 97

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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful epilogue.
Thank you for a beautiful Arshi story.
Love your writing and hope you will return after your break.

Edited by bkamber - 11 years ago
Seethu thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

ALS has been a wonderful journey for me ... I always get instantly connected with your stories and ALS is one of them ..

ALS has everything that one will experience in real life - emotions, morals, heartbreaks and most importantly second chances ...
I know you are human being and you too need break but somehow I'm feeling low when you mentioned that it could be permanent ; I hope and wish that it will be only a temporary one ...
Thank you so much !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Jen i just don't know what to say...Speechless and i think i still don't want to say goodbye to Foster.
What a journey this has been and i am so happy and glad that i was part of this journey from the beginning to the end.
If it weren't for my love for Foster i don't think i would have made so many wonderful friends in this virtual world.
So thank you for writing this wonderful story and making me fall in love with Foster so passionately. 😳

What a realistic ending this has been. I could see glimpses of my life throughout 😆😳
I am so happy to see Foster and his mrs fighting and battling the everyday problems of life but the best part being how they make up in the end and come out strong.

Thanks Jen once again for taking us on this wonderful journey. I am so happy that i got to know you during this time. Love you! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Im sorry jen I know I will be last

Was not online for quite some day as was busy with Eid and all

The course of my life is changing will PM u once its settled

Now... it was such superb final epilogue

Ad I will never get enough of them, still feeling like we want more

Jenny ur an amazing writer and trust me when I say this I will be there whenever you write a story ...

I hope u will come with doctor doctor story

Love you and today this song is for you and for ur stories

Kaise batheye ke tujhko chahe

Yara bathana paye

Bathe dilon ki dekho jo baki

Aake tujhe samjhaye

Tu jane na

Love u jen ur a gem 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
Aptly befitting and immaculately penned, last epilogue ..invoking a plethora of emotions, and,rendering me mute... take a bow, Jenny...you have done it again!! This story will be etched in my memory for a very long time..Thank You!!!
Edited by Aanchal15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

I read all your IF stories and love them dearly. But ALS has got a special place in my heart. I am sure that I will never forget Arnav Foster and Khushi, Branny and others. Thank you very much for giving us this fantastic story... You really are a gifted writer..
I will wait for your coming back with another Arshi FF after your much needed break. For me, never lose charm of Arshi and your stories.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love how real this was- all couples have problems finding their "us" times when there are kids in the picture. We tend to take our loved ones for granted all the time. I just hope that we can learn to be more appreciative and attentive, just like Khushi did. I'm going to miss this Arnav and Khushi. A lot.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jen sorry for late comment.

But I was not sure how I word my mixed feelings. The sadness that ALS has finally ended and no more Mr. Foster. SKD ending and AD starts.

Much as we like SKD to be running, AD catches up. Kids have grown demanding more energy, work and career become basherz and romance sometimes takes a backseat. You barely manage to do tick off all from do to list by end of the day with hardly any energy left for the spouse. Isn't it story of us all?

The kids are adorable. Branny is a big bro and Emma, Sophie and Aiden are too cute. I would love to read about their growing up part too someday. I mean from birth t this day! How Mr and Mrs Foster managed..
So can you keep it on your to do list.. Someday??


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Posted: 11 years ago
I never thought I would ever get to see a last Epilogue to a story. But then this is Jenny, and Foster has always been in demand. Ye toh hona hi tha!

Arnav and Khushi in this story have been lovable. At times stubborn, at times helpless, at times loving, at times torn - this story has been a ride of emotions. Happiness, despair, hope, love, faith, heart-break - everything combined to give us a story that we'll miss and surely remember forever.

I will seriously miss this. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I'm happy I got to read and enjoy it!

Love,
Mav
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Jenny,


I don't know what to say. This update was hard for me to read because I knew that after this there won't be any more ALS updates and I just didn't want it to be over. I am happy and sad at the same time. Happy because I got be part of such a wonderful journey and sad because it has ended. You have so many readers and you get so many wonderful comments, I don't know if you remember any of previous comments. I have said it before and I will say it again, you took me to places I have never visited. You took me to Landour with Arnav and Khushi and I felt I was with them in their journey. I wish to visit Landour someday just because of ALS. ALS stirred so many emotions...your words were heartfelt and created visuals...It was easy to connect and fall in love with. Words aren't enough to tell you how much I love ALS.


The last epilogue was perfect. We got a glimpse of their life together after a few years with their kids...a glimpse of their happily ever after. You changed their surnames and background and but you kept the essence of Arnav and Khushi intact. I love Raizada and Gupta but you made me fall in love with Foster and Craven...and you made me fall in love with little Branny. ALS will always be special to me.


I fully understand your need to take a break, but I hope after TBWAD and Intoxication...you will come back from your break and continue to write. If not FFs then OSs maybe. Dr. Raizada sounds interesting. 😳 Hope to read more works from you because it is always a pleasure reading your stories.


Thank you so much for giving us ALS. 🤗

Edited by incandescent - 11 years ago

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