A Late Spring Epilogue// IMP NOTE Pg. 164 - Page 96

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Posted: 11 years ago
Its a wonderful life!
Finally its over.. No more updates can be expected..

In any case, I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving us such a beautiful story.. a memory to be treasured for long long time. I loved everything about the story.. all characters, their lives and thoughts, the incidents, downhills and uphills in their lives ..everything!

And what should I say about Arnav and Khushi! They are perfect! I do not know if people like them exist in real life.. But because of you, we got to see people like them . In this point, I should mention that, i don't know why, but whenever i read your stories, i can see YOU in Khushi. I do not know you, but i have a feeling that you have a soul just like Khushi! The way you portray khushi, you have to have such goodness in you!

And do you know why??? I have noticed, you never disappoint your readers! You never undermine any of your reader.. you fulfill your readers' demands, even if the are too much sometimes... And you also have the power to do that in a beautiful , aesthetic way!

I wish you all the happiness in your life! Just like all your Khushis have got in tehir lives!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I have loved this ff from start to finish. its made me laugh and cry along with arnav and khushi, feeling their pain, their love, their heartbreak when they were separated.
I am going to miss this so so much, but thank you for giving us this wonderful story.
look forward to reading more of your work.
hope you have a nice break, enjoy time with your loved ones, but please come back soon,
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Posted: 11 years ago
An amazing ending. It's nice to see them both working through any problems thy come across together. Aww the triplets are so cute! It's quite funny how arnv was trying to spend time with his wife. But I do understand khushis point of view. After looking after the kids, going to work, doing housework I don't blame her for being tired. This been said it is up to both partners to make time otherwise they tend to drift apart.

Thank you so much for this story! U are such a talented writer! Absolutely love reading your work.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Absolutely brilliant ending, loved the way you showed their day to day life which was nothing different than us but how in the end it's always upto a couple to overcome all their issues with love n understanding. Fantastic update, totally loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was amazing..
I still cant believe it has ended,,
Your FFs help me and inspire me a lot Jenny..
I want to thankyou Jenny for all your FFs
you surely deserve a break but please make it a short one😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

The kids squabbling over which show to watch and then Branny strolling in and cleverly getting them all to watch what he wants is adorable yet very realistic... brought back memories of my interactions with my elder brother: As the three five year olds gathered around him and poured out their grievances, a transient naughty look suffused Branny's hazel eyes... cute! He must be thoroughly enjoying taking on the elder brother role. Arnav and Khushi working away in companionable silence is pleasing... his frustration at the unexpected meeting taking longer than usual to end, her listing of the schedule for Sunday, especially the kids' activities, his kiss being interrupted by her warning about the open door and Branny's arrival make for a very realistic portrait of married life. ...his request of addressing him as Brandon instead of the silly nick name, Branny, which he now found embarrassing, especially in front of his friends... awww, Brandon is all grown up... nice of Arnav to treat him as such and to comply with his wishes. With four kids around, it's not surprising that Arnav and Khushi have little time for intimate moments. ...the three younger kids somehow managing to sit in Arnav's lap all at the same time... looks like any chance they get, they would like to be as close to their dad as possible. Arnav desperate for the kids to go off to sleep so he can spend some time with Khushi, his efforts going to waste and having to turn to her for help, the bargaining between her and the kids are all highly entertaining. "Even fifteen is too much, if you ask me..," murmured Arnav with his eyes fixed on the TV screen... poor Arnav, can understand his frustration, which was compounded when he finally made it to his room only to find his exhausted wife fast asleep and in no mood for intimacies... very realistic! Despite his frustration, he doesn't continue with his amorous ministrations when Khushi sleepily stops him... shows what a loving husband he is. Sadly for him, his morning moments with his wife, where she is a also a willing participant, get interrupted again... Hearing her, Mr. Foster spat a mouthful of toothpaste foam into the sink in a long suffering manner and wisely decided to ignore her... while I sympathise with his predicament, the image is amusing! She turned to look at Branny, but before she could even utter a word, he said firmly, "Keep me out of it, Mama". The kid sure has learnt fast. Looks like Aiden is a foodie like the on-screen Khushi. Sofia's and Emma's excitement at passing messages between their parents is endearing. Lovely to see little Sofia admonish her dad for sending a hurtful message to her mom. So you just LET me make love to you as if it's not something you would be interested in too... their quarrel doesn't seem at all contrived... it must be provoking to miss out on the spontaneity, especially when he feels he's making all the moves while she is only going through the motions... one can't blame her either as she is overwhelmed by work and family responsibilities, not to say that he isn't. Khushi over-thinking their fight and coming to the conclusion that she has taken Arnav's love for granted is quite natural... the coldness from Arnav's side, as seen in his texts, just adds to her woes... wish she had taken the time to go surprise her hubby at the office. The ease with which they apologised and then spoke about their predicament indicates that their marital bonds will only go from strength to strength. Making up is always the fun part of quarrels and when pent-up desire is added to the mix it makes for an incredible combustion. Their bargaining as to how many times they need to declare their love is cutely reminiscent of Khushi's bargaining with the kids. The lyrics of 'The Evergreen Tree' are very apt for the Arnav-Khushi love story. A brilliantly written final epilogue that leaves us with a sense of warmth and well-being and the feeling that this couple will always be able to overcome all the obstacles in life thanks to their love and support of each other.

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Posted: 11 years ago
This last update was so beautiful & vivid.One could easily relate to happenings in daily life.The sibling fighting out for TV time , the big brother taking it from under their noses...Arshi wanting to spend time with each other but unable to do so.The little nok jhoks ..The kids playing the part of messengers.
Things working out for Arshi eventually bcoz of their love & understanding.

Simply a beautiful end to a beautiful story.

Thanks once again
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Posted: 11 years ago
A really befitting closing to this amazing story. It was just awesome to read a glimpse in the lives of the Foster family in the future and how everyone is coping in the family unit with day to day to life. This last epilogue is such an apt depiction in the day of the lives of any married couple in love facing their fair share of ups and downs with the coming together always intense with each partner trying hard for the reconciliation and not wanting to fight. Thank you again for giving us this wonderful sorry.
I am disheartened to hear that you will going for a break after you complete your current two stories. Keeping fingers crossed that you will come back to entertain us with more stories of Arnav and Khushi
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Posted: 11 years ago
this would probably the best epilougesi have ever read and im just left speechless once again!!i dont even know wat to comment..just one thing thanq for this ausum story and i feel preveliged and lucky dat i got to read some of the fantastic stories by you and il feel proud of myself for joing if...😊
watever you write youl have me as your fan and regular reader for sure...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey congratulations on successfully ending your story on such a beautiful note. It was beautiful journey you took us on and some unforgettable memories shall always be with me. Thanks a lot for the beautiful story dear. For giving us Mr and Mrs. Foster and ofcourse, branny, the sweetheart. Hope to see more of your writings in future😊

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