A Late Spring Epilogue// IMP NOTE Pg. 164 - Page 95

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey im a 1st rime reader and read it all in 2days...i Have No words to express how i feel about ALS!!! GOSH THIS IS SO SO SOOO BEAUTIFUL...I cried Buckets after Buckets while reading...Such a well written story..and has a Happy Ending!!! :D
Just wanna tell you that pleease keep this amazing writing going on...I know you must be busy with your baby n after such an emotional story you should take a break but please come back...and YES I will forever be in love with Arnav n Khushi and will be waiting for stories written about them...so come back n give us a story about them being Doctors? :D
Thank you again...All the very best for you and family...come back soon! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful epilogue Jen. Loved it. I know my comments are usually very short. Its just that I am not very good at writing analysis of stories. Also I am usually hard pressed for time. But I would like to say that I sincerely enjoyed every story of yours and thats why when you said that you will be going on a break which could also possibly be permanent one, I was like NOOO...We just cannot afford to loose such a talented author from IF. You can take a break, whether it is a few days, weeks or months, but please please don't go on a permanent break. Remember you have fans waiting here. But no pressure ok. And thanks alot for entertaining us with your stories :)
Edited by leanne_1983 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow such an amazing update..an ff with a beautiful message for ppl who r in love,who r married and loved n who r loved n married..this is such an amazing epilogue..days goingby n their responsibilities r increasing especially in kushi's case..and arnav's frustrations for kushi's negligance that was sometyms scary to feel..arnav shud understand her in such circumstances that being a mother of 4 children,taking care of them including him n her work that she wud be exhausting..and he was no less in that too..still he shud n hope he wud..coz somewhere we cud see that kushi's insecurities visible when he not tried to understand her,left for office n came late..but atlast they were in true love n they tried to pamper each other with lovely words and finally the song was so nice n so apt for them..i hope Mr.Foster being a businessman n being a gud hubby ,gud lover n gud father wud liveup to his wifey's expectations n hope she wud fill his lyf with bringing lifelong happiness n love..n wish their life as evergreen...n thanx a lot for writing ur ff for us dear..they r evergreen..:)

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Posted: 11 years ago
It was an awesome journey.
I love this ff.
Beautiful.
I will miss this one badly.
All the best dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww, Jenny, your author's note teared me up.

ALS ended prefectly with a realistic, yet hopefully reassuring snapshot of the lives of Mr and Mrs, Foster! This is lif when the business of living does very often get in the way of loving, but if the love is a strong one, it will find its way amidst the daily grind of family life.

Thank you for a beautiful and heart warming story, though the spring was late in coming, it created a beautiful garden.
Edited by Japonica - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Jenny,
I just came across your writing and this is your first piece which I have read. It is just brilliantly built story. Each and every emotion is very well depicted. I loved each and every character in the story and each has a part to play. Not a single character is extra. Just awesome concept. Thanks for such a wonderful story. Looking forwards to read more of your works.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Commented on page 121 ... šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was Beautiful, Jenny...!!!! 😭
The Foster family is adorable...!!!! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is honestly a very bittersweet for me to read this chapter. Although I loved every part of it, I am so sad that there will be no more updates I will have to look forward to reading😭

Jenny, you have done an amazing job with this story, starting with the characters, the plots, the setting and everything and anything in between, it was all perfect. Congrats to you for writing such a beautiful storyšŸ‘ And thank you for sharing it with us!

Loved the third epilogue just as much as every part update you have written. Arnav and Khushi stayed very much true to the characters you created from the very beginning. Their love is always what brings them together and I love how you show it.

The triplets are cute as ever. Can't even imagine how cute it would be to see Sofia admonish her dad for not sounding very nice. Branny is so grown up now and is the perfect older brother type.

I don't think I have the proper words to convey how much I love this story so I'll stop now.

And I really hope that you enjoy your break and you do come back and share more of your work with us! I will definitely be reading anything you write!
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Posted: 11 years ago
And they lived happily ever after...wow... A beautiful end to a beautiful story...loved every bit of it...I m so gonna miss it...I used to stalk your page 8-10 times a day everyday and used to read your each update at least 4-5 times every time...I m going to miss that for sure...despite of re-reading it so many times, I have again started reading it from start...cnt help it yar...I m addicted to this story. ...it was a beautiful journey and you did full justice to this story by narrating each and every emotion so beautifully...a roller coaster ride full of emotions...we laughed, cried, smiled with the characters of your story...i thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing it so beautifully and giving a perfect end to this not so perfect love story...god bless you dear...you are truely amazing:) keep on rocking :D

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