Smitar's: Loving Khushi#5 Part 20, 21 Pg 1 (4/9) - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
it was so beautiful
loved the ending the way u recalled thier past
amazing
waiting for ur new story
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Posted: 12 years ago
awe loved it ,loved and simply loved it to the core...
looking eagerly for the 12th sep now :)
thanks smita and rashmi :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh.itz sad to know that this is ending...enjoyed reading it a lot... loved the cheesy romance that lighted up the hectic days of work..keep up the lovely work...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg it finished
aww love all ur stories smita.
eagerly waiting for 12th sep
thanks for writing such beautiful stories :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing ending beautifully done amazing finally both are back where they belong in each other arms away from the hurt and the pain and the world
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks smita for these wonderful series of stories. .you do great justice as always!
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG this story ended...
awesome updates..
aww finally she go back to her arnavji
amazing ending
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh that was a beautiful ending. Loved every bit of this story
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 20:
Needing to breath the same air she breathed,arnav goes their,to the temple. and talked to khushi's Devi Maiya to ask her for his khushi to came back. as arnav expressed his desperation,plea, i get filled,and tears rolled down.
the man who never believed in God, never went to temple has come today only to feel his wife's presence,to breath same air where once she used to come,to talk to her Devi maiya if the Goddess can pursue her daughter khushi to come to him.

part 21: and finally happy ending with happy tears. as they both r contend with each other.
in this whole os,there's not a single part where i didn't cry and laughed after that. like crying and smiling at the same time.
i cant thank u enough Smitar for this wonderful os.
thank u very much!
waiting for ur next story!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Will definitely miss this awesome story for sure
But a very awesome ending it was
Loved it
Will be waiting for next story now

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