SwaRon OS : I am still me? |*Challenged by Marium*|

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

wow

singdha

i super likey

marium ke challene ne mujhe khush kar diya 😆😆

this was fabulous

so interesting and really well penned down

i am in love with it

thanks for the PM

and im really sorry for the late comment 😕

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

^_^ Unresd this one also!

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

I wanted to read dis os from few days but was not able to read..
Finally i read it..
Concept seemed really interesting n a really very difficult challenge..
N i must say u wrote it like beautifully..
Such an sensitive issue n really difficult challenge..
For me toh u completely did amazing job for dis challenge..
It was so blissfull..
D pain of sharon n her emotions nd swayam supporting her being with her was portrayed brilliantly..
Loved it..
Superb os yaar..

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Snigdha you write so awesome! \n/
I absolutely loved it but the sad part is i didn't wanted it to end :/
I wanted to read more as you explained swayam and sharon's state like total wow.
Especially the start, sharon creating distance from swayam and swayam wanting to make her feel better was awww :')
If you write anything on SwaRon then do pm me please :)

Marium nice challenge :)

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Hey Snigs🤗

You are such an amazing writer...loved the way u portrayed pain...her pain..his guilt..his pain...her apprehensions ...beautiful penned down...i love love strories...happy endings..happily ever after..but i love tragedies a little more...i love soulful love...where true love wins over all obstacles...his feelings were never affected by her condition...during those painful moments all she could care about was his pain...that is called love...wonderful depictions of LOVE...

PS- loved the title😳

Love

Deepika