Swaron FF: End of Love??[NEW CHAPTER UP!FINALLY]

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

do get well soon tanvish

i was practically doing dance when i saw ur update

but then i remembered tat you are not well n a image of ur came in my mind

tis was a emotional update

after the events tat took place last nite a very hurt sharon went

to take her stuff from swayam's house witout kriya

tis is the sharon i like she is soft yet strong

her monlogue was very beautifully penned

the flashback in between was very

soft , romantic n heart-touching

the scene itself was so warm tat at the end

i knew how painful it is for the two of them

to part ways from each other

the best part about you as a writer is

you are giving me tis romantic flashbacks

which makes the whole story more painful

all in all a very heart-touching update

do update soon

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

res 😊

first of all get well soon..and tk cr of your self... 😊

coming to d update...

it was amazing dear..loved it.. 😊

it ws emotional yet cute...

both really care for each other... 😳

d way dey were controlling der emotions was nicely penned down..

waiting for next update now.. 😊

Edited by sweetdivya - 11 years ago

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Hey Tanvish. 🤗First of all wishing u a speedy recovery and get well soon dear :)

Plz don't discontinue your works and especially this one its really intruing and I look forward to read it 😳😳

You are doing an exceptionally well job with this. I love the story and the plot development with the characters being well developed. 👏👏⭐️

Plz do continue with it and love it<3

The update was superb and aww Swaron lost in their own world. Update soon but only after getting well :)

Loads of love and good wishes!!

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Hey tanvish first of all get well soon
You are an awesome writer and please don't bother about those people who don't care about the hard work you are doing for us
Please don't discontinue this ff I love to read your work
The chapter is awesome now eagerly waiting what had happened that swayam has to take such a decision of leaving Sharon
Thanks for updating only for us
Love you for this
Update soon

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Update was great...
But do take care of ur self...

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

awesome part..

loved d concern kriya has for sharon..

flashback scene was cute n d way sharon remembered everything was awesome.. swayam n sharon lost in past was painful to read..

swayam drank d drink thinking sharon was cute.. still making those funny faces.. him remembering d fun moments of them 4 was nice..

sharon's pov abt swayam well penned..

wat cozed their prefect life to become imperfect???

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nightlife1881

@Priyanka_G14

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

hey get well soon

n plz dont discontinue

coming 2 d upgrade it was nice😊

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

edited on pg 18 😊

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Ashu

@Avalanche.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Wow! I just read all the chapters in one go and they were amazing!! You portrayed their feelings with such accuracy that I was literally crying!! Thanks for the pm and thanks for writing this amazing and heart touching story!

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Rishabh Narula

@swaron1107

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#140

It was a nice update with Sharon's thoughts nicely written. It was more from Sharon's side and now waiting for Swayam's side to know why is he doing all this.

Get Well Soon Dear!!!!!!!