Originally posted by: Tyagi.dishant
Brilliant update. Loved every bit of it.
Kindly PM me next time. Thanks for the lovely update.
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Originally posted by: Tyagi.dishant
Brilliant update. Loved every bit of it.
Kindly PM me next time. Thanks for the lovely update.
Hey Tanvish
First of all really sry for not commenting. Actually I am really very busy and hardly get time for anyother activity.Coming to the updates..they are really very beautifully written. 👏👏The pian..the hurt..the seperation everything is well crafted in this FF<3But I am hating too see them like this 😭 but those flashbooks surely cover up.Sharon and Swayam's turmoil is beautifully expressed. Both were busy personalites but still got time for each other that's so real.Please disclose the reason of their seperation and bring these two back again. 😳LoveFatima.
Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
finally finsih read ur all ff in one go... but it was quite emotional but
feeling written were amazing... i was almost in pain...
do continue soon and pm me
Originally posted by: Muskan_SwaRon
how could i miss this FF 😭
the prologue nd character sketch were amazing
chapter 1 was awesome i liked the bond b/w sharon n kriya
swaron divorce 😔
Chapter 2 it was simply awesome i always like how you describe the flashback
Swayam enjoying in a club was a bit awkward at first but then his lines made me cry 😭
they both are hurt very much
i also liked the reyam bond in it
looking forward for the next chapter
love u Tanvish 🤗
Originally posted by: Cenjonstrand
awesome update
both swayam and sharon are hurt
update soon
Originally posted by: vaishu88
awesome concept n story line.. CS was awesome..
chap 1 n 2 were beautifully n brilliantly penned..d pain love n helplessness of swaron was penned brilliantly..sharon s helplessly in love with swayam but s divorced..swayam s madly in love with sharon but wants her to b happy n so pushed her from him for something happened which sharon doesn't know..sharon's pain thinking she s bad n not worthy to live with was painful to read..both r madly in love with each other but something happened in swayam's side that he pushed her away..KR giving support to their sister n friends respectively was awesome n it was nice that they ve some1 to let their hearts out n cry n share things..wat s d mystery.. waiting for next part ve sent u bud req accept it n pm me wen u update next..
Chapter 3
The sun rose high up in the sky.. The birds chirping and singing sweet melodies.. The trees dances to the tune of the winds.. A beautiful morning for all.. Maybe.. Sharon was up early so maybe hadn't slept all night.. She had got ready and was just collecting her stuff. Her face pale and eyes swollen.. The glint in her eyes that people fell for was missing.. She had tied up her hair and was dressed in casuals.. While check for her keys and belonging she started moving to the door when Kriya entered her room with a cup of coffee..
Kriya (cheerfully): Hey Choti, Good Morning..
Sharon: Morning Dida..
Kriya (looking at her dressed up and ready): Kya hua? Itni subh subh kahan jaa rahi hai?
Sharon: Woh dida, woh ghar.. I mean Swayam ke ghar mera kuch saaman reh gaya tha.. Usse hi collect karne jaa rahi hu..
Kriya: Chalo, I'll come with you..
Sharon: Nahi.. Please aap mat aao.. Aap aaoge toh phirse aap dono ke beech koi argument ho jayegi.. And subh subh mujhe inn arguments main nahi padhna hai..
Kriya: Theek hai.. I promise argue nahi karungi!
Sharon: Nahi dida.. Kab tak aap mere saath aise harr jagah aate rahoge? At the end mujhe usse face toh karna hi hai na! I know you love me a lot aur bachpan se aapne humesha mujhe out of the way jaakar protect kiya hai but please let me face this by myself.. Please..
Kriya (sighing): Ok.. Go.. (cupping her face with one hand) But agar kuch hua toh call me ok?!
Sharon gave her and assuring smile and started walking ahead..
Kriya (stopping): Aare choti sunn.. Rey abhi mujhe pick karne aa rahe hai.. Toh main unke saath directly office jaa rahi hu.. Toh raat ko milte hai.. ok?
Sharon: Haan ok.. waise bhi main wahan se kaam pe hi jaane wali thi..See you.. Bye
Kriya: Bye..
At the Shekhawat Mansion..
Swayam had dosed off on the chair the previous night.. His state was not that great as well.. His sleep was disturbed when he heard the bell ring.. He slowly opened his eyes but the brightness struck him hard.. Blinking a few times he got use to the light.. And that was when Swayam realised that he had a terrible hangover.. All thanks to the drinks he had last night.. Kaka had opened the door so he didn't have to take the strain of getting up from his place.. He held his head in his palm with his elbows resting on his knees.. His head was really pounding.. First the drinks and then the thoughts had together shown the result.. Just then he heard a knock on his door..
Swayam (without):Kaka, darwaza khulla hai.. (hearing the door open) Kaka please ek garam coffee bana dena.. Sarr dard ke maare phat raha hai..
Person standing at the door: Coffee se tumhara hangover nahi uthrega..
Swayam's head shot up on listening to that voice.. That voice which was his life.. The voice that woke him up every morning.. The voice that could make up his mood.. But now he had pushed out the same voice out of his life.. She was standing right there.. Her face pallid and eyes emoting the intensity of the pain her heart is going through.. His eyes were like the mirror image
Sharon stood at the door.. Looking deep into his chocolaty brown orbs trying to find the answers to the unanswered questions.. Both souls lost.. Their minds travelled to something that had happened in the past..
*FLASHBACK*
It was a Sunday morning.. Usually a day when Swayam and Sharon did nothing but just spent quality time with on another romancing.. having fun.. watching movies.. or cooking together.. But these Sunday's morning would end up in a disaster if they had partied the previous night.. Sharon didn't mind Swayam having fun and drinking with friends but at times he would go a bit over the limit.. This would end up with him cribbing the next morning and eating Sharon's head.. [Don't believe.. Check this out then]
Sharon was up long back.. the clock had struck 11am and her dear husband was yet in bed.. She had finished the morning cleaning.. preparing breakfast.. getting ready.. bt now was hungry and was waiting for Swayam to get up so that they can atleast have their Sunday breakfasts together.. She walked into their room and sat next to on the bed..
Sharon (removing the blanket from his face): Swayam! Get up!! Dekho kitni der ho gayi hai and you are still in bed..
As soon as Swayam felt her presence around him, he shifted his head from the pillow to her lap hugging her by her waist.. Sharon smiled and started massaging his hair with one hand while the other was creasing his back..
Sharon: Baby utho na!
Swayam: Mera sarr bahut dukh raha hai.. Please sone do na!
Sharon: Aare! Sone se sarr dard kum nahi hoga.. Waise bhi yeh sab tumhari galti hai.. Aur piyo parties main.. Mat suno meri baat..
Swayam looked up at her angrily pouting..
Swayam: Idhar mera sarr itna dukh raha hai aur tum mujhe taunt kar rahi ho! Seedha seedha kaho na you don't care.. Suna kyun rahi ho!
Sharon: Kamaal hai! Bina matlab ke mujhpe chad rahe ho.. Maine kya kiya hai?
Swayam: You don't care about me! Nahi toh abhi mujhe taunt na karke mere iss sarr dard ke liye kuch karti.. Jao mujhe tumse baat hi nahi karni..
Swayam saying so again hugged her waist and hid his face.. Sharon chuckled and continued massaging his head..
Sharon: Theek hai! Mat karo baat! Mujhe kya!
Swayam with a jerk again looked at her with a pout..
Swayam: Sharon!!!
Sharon: Haan!!
Swayam (cranky): Please kuch karo na!!
Sharon without replying back placed her palm on his forehead and flattened it with a bit of pressure.. Swayam closed his eyes as he was liking it.. She continued giving him a head massage.. After a while she bent down giving him a deep peck on his forehead.. He was grinning ear-to-ear.. She didn't move, her lips were yet in contact with his skin passing on the warmth..
Sharon: Baby!
Swayam: Hmmm
Sharon: Please fresh ho jao main tumhare hangover ke liye kuch leke aati hu..
Swayam (opening his eye): Nahi please massage continue karo na! Accha lag raha hai..
Sharon (sternly): Swayam!
Swayam mocking fake hurt got out of the bed and got into the bathroom to freshen-up.. Sharon moved to the kitchen to get some lemon water for her hubby.. After about 10 minutes he was walking down from their room holding his head with both hand and an irritated expression..
Swayam (irritated): Sharon!!
Sharon (walking out of the kitchen): Aa rahi hoon Swayam!!
She handed him a glass of lemon water and a pain killer..
Sharon (sternly): Chup chap pura paani pee jao!
Swayam (taking a sip from the glass): Yuck!!! Sharon kitna kadva hai!!
Sharon: SWAYAM! JUST DRINK IT! NOW!!
Swayam (innocently): Please iss main thoda sugar ya salt toh daalo!
In response Sharon gave him a deadly glare.. He knew it would no way be his way.. Dropping the idea of making any excuses he put the tablet in his mouth and gulped down the entire glass make cutely funny expressions.. She chuckled looked at the full grown kid she has to deal with everyday..
*FLASHBACK ENDS*
Both had a cute smile dancing on their faces.. As they say Good old day are Gold old memories' .. Both were lost in a trance when suddenly a voice disturbed them..
Kaka: Beta, aapko koi madat chahiye samaan uthane ke liye?
Sharon (geeting out of her trance):Aaa... haan.. Woh kaka main samaan pack kar leti hoon tab tak aap please jaake ek glass nimbu paani (lemon water) le aaiye..Aur guest room main jo dawai ka dabba rakha hai woh bhi le aaiye.. Sarr dard ki dawai ussi main hoti hai..
Kaka: Ji beta.. Le aata hoon..
Kaka was about to leave when Sharon stopped him
Sharon: Aur haan Kaka, Paani thoda garam karna.. Aur nimbu paani main shakkar (sugar) ya namak (salt) mat daalna..
Kaka: Ji beta..
Kaka left from there and Sharon moved inside avoiding looking at Swayam.. Here he was yet in a trance until he heard her giving instructions to kaka.. He smiled looking at her concern and was amazed that even after all this while she was still aware of the things in this house.. which was once theirs.. The smile that was on his face dropped when he recollected the last bit.. She placed a box on the table and was moving to the closet getting her belongings.. His eyes travelled with her..
Swayam (getting up from the chair): Sharon! Tum? Yahan?
Sharon (continuing her work): Sorry tumhe disturb karne ke liye par mujhe mera baaki ka samaan huma..I mean tumhare ghar se pick karna tha.. Taaki mujhe yahan na ana pade..
Her tone was chilling cold.. Swayam flinched at her comment but he also knew this was what he wanted..
Swayam (moving forward): Main help..
Sharon (cutting him): No need! Main kar lugi.. Don't trouble yourself..
Swayam's fist balled up tight as he was trying to control the gush of emotions going inside him.. He went into the bathroom and banged the door standing there taking in a deep breath to calm himself.. On the other hand Sharon kept her things in the box and sat on the couch breathing out heavily.. She covered her face with both her palms..
Sharon (in mind): Why are you making it so difficult for me Swayam? It already is very hard to handle myself.. Please don't do this.. I did what you wanted.. Tumhe divorce chahiye tha, maine diya.. Tumhe mujhse dur rehna tha, main yahan se chali gayi.. Phir kyun? Kyun tum itna hurt ho? Why are you so lifeless? Why do I see a shattered Swayam in front of me? This is not the Swayam I have known.. Why Swayam? What has happened to you? What's disturbing you so much? Why are you bottling up all those feeling? Please don't do this.. You won't be able handle it for long.. Please get it out.. (realising what she is thinking) Sharon control yourself! You no more have a right on him.. is not happy with your presence.. You have to leave.. Jaldi se apna samaan le aur nikal yahan se!
Her thought process was disturbed by a call..
On the phone..
Sharon: Haan dida!
Kriya: Choti tu theek hai na?
Sharon: Yes.. I'm fine.. Stop worrying so much!
Kriya: Oh hello! You are my younger sister! So you don't hold the right to tell me if I need to worry about you or not.. Got that?!
Sharon: Aye Aye Captain!
Kriya: Tu ab tak wahin hai?
Sharon: Haan bas 5 minute main nikal rahi hoon..
Kriya: Ok! Raat ko milte hai..
Sharon: Yes!
Kriya: Bye
Sharon: Bye.. (after a second pause) Dida!
Kriya: Haan
Sharon: Love you..
Kriya: Love you too Choti.. Chal shaamko mlte hai..
Both hang up while bidding a final bye.. Swayam was yet in the bathroom and had over-heard Sharon while she was on the call.. He was smiling as he always adored Sharon and Kriya's bond.. It was a mutual feeling between Rey and Swayam and they both would enjoy the sister's love, care and also their fights which would end up involving Swayam and Rey too.. It was like a rule that Swayam had to take Kriya's side and Rey had to take Sharon's side as they were best friends.. There would also be times when Kriya would treat Sharon like her own kid and that was surely a pleasant sight for them to watch..
Swayam walked out of the bathroom remembering the time all four of them would hangout together.. Just then kaka entered the room with a tray holding a glass with lemon water and a box.. Sharon was done with packing her stuff and had just tapped up the box.. She moved to kaka and opened the box searching for a particular medicine..
Swayam (in mind): Love that cute pout when she is trying to concentrate..
Sharon handover the medicine to Kaka and gave him a warm smile.. Kaka gave the water and the medicine to Swayam and then took the box Sharon had packed.. Sharon was abot to leave the room..
Swayam: Sharon!
Sharon stopped in her track and closed her eyes hoping that she can control her tears.. She didn't respond back but just waited for him to proceed..
Swayam (softly): Thanks! Woh juice aur medicine ke liye..
Without uttering a single word Sharon left..
Swayam: Sorry Shar.. I know main tumhe bahut hurt kar raha hoon.. But this is for your good..
Swayam looked at the juice and smiled remembering how Sharon got him to drink this everytime.. And imaging her doing the same now he gulped down the juice with the medicine with the same funny expressions..
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2 Very IMPORTANT notes below
Important Note
Hey guys,
Firstly I'm sorry, I know iss baar update bahut late kiya but had my some personal reasons for it..
Coming to the Note this one is to bring to notice to all the reader's/silent reader's that the response I'm getting for the FF's is not satisfactory.. I kept on updating thinking that I shall atleast write for the people who actually read and comment.. But at the end even I'm waiting for a feedback on if you'll are liking the story or not.. As there is a decrease in the number of likes and comment then I think that you'll are not liking the story so what's the point in continuing it?
If you'll not quiet happy with the story or something please let me know I shall discontinue the FF.. I'm going to see the response I get to this chapter and if the number of likes and comment and not much then I shall discontinue the FF and not update it further.. And please guys it hardly takes about 2 mins to comment so please avoid writing single word just for the sake of commenting as they are not less discouraging..
Now it's for you'll to decide..
I'm really sorry if I was harsh.. The number of PM's I send and then number of likes and comments I get is poles apart and that's very discouraging.. It can put any writers confidence down..
I will be waiting for you feedback and likes
Love
Tanvish
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