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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely story..
u updated it after a long time
thans for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pls updt next part soon...plz plz plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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1 story 3 writers firbhi 1 bhi updt nahi...bohot na insafi he...hufff
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
awesome work...FIZA...
ANNE and NAINA...
I liked the story line...
thanks for PM...
do cont soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Updt updt updt updt updt updt updt updt updt updt updt updt updt updt updt updt updt updt
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Superb story ... u guys are really rocking this ff... Manvi and viren married !!! They have a kid !!! Muski is sooo cute... Manvis reaction when virat came infront of her and after knwing tht viren nd viren r brothers... tht was really awsm.. Loved how u described virats change in feelings or his weakness or the strange pull when muski is in his arms is awsmly described... Loved virat being jealous of viren and manvis relationsip and seeing their happy family-life...Exellent job guys...its so different...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please updt soon now... am eagerly waiting. And oh yaa... I am really curious to know what have the kamina virat done with manvi in past tht she had to drop out !!! Pls cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Please updt soon now... am eagerly waiting. And oh yaa... I am really curious to know what have the kamina virat done with manvi in past tht she had to drop out !!! Pls cont soon...



All of this isnt in my hands yaar... Anne of fiza might know d real reason... I am trying to make d next updt quick...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Good job Naina!!! And thanks for making another thread on this! :D
Chapter 5(c) was longer and I like it! :D

Annie
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina927

iss response ke liye maine itna time waste kia...
commendable...!!!


Oye! Thhand rakh, Naina! You gotta have patience here! Don't let the less number of comments or likes put down your confidence! 😳

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