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.LiveLaughLove.

@.LiveLaughLove.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Amazing update! 😊 👏 Thank u so much for the pm! Take care! 😳

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Bhabani90

@Bhabani90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Read the whole in one go.. Its just amazing.. M cnfsud abt Wats up wit virat n manvi's past? Hope will soon get the answer and waiting for the nxt update.

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Superb Update..!! M commenting once again..cz earlier comment was happiness of having the update after a long time..loved the update..maanvi's past and present together and the worse they are brothers...but like Viren he knows Virat's intention when it comes to deal with a lady...Virat stil thinks he stands a chance with Maanvi...their past is still to come..Maanvi has surely moved on..and reading prologue..Virat will have her his way..and make his own family with Maanvi..Waiting for next n Thanks Naina for the Update..!

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

naina thanx alott for continuing this one re reallly a fab surprise love it 😃
really interesting one and you are continuing soo awesomly ...
virat trying soo hard to get manvi but manvi least bothered instead soo buzzi in her family is sooo awesome loving the frustrated virat 😆
and muskki is a sweetie pie love her 😃😃
update next part soon and do pm me

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Jannat

@Jannat94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Hey Naina brilliant work sweety
i like this story...and read it before by them and now we get ur touch in it
thanx 4 cont it
brillinat update by u also
loved it but I'm hell confused when I read it before
who is real pair means jeevika and viren or manvi or virat or viren and manvi
atleast we know na who is villain or who is hero😉 😆
Thanx 4 the Pm Naina
waiting for next part
update soon😃

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Hey naina... Its really an awsm story... Ohhh!!! how much I love this jelous virat and his thoughts on manvi, almost loosing control and the way he is feeling when muskaan is in his arms... You described their emotions really well... Great work!!! At the same time I cant help but feel bad for all of them- viren, virat, manvi.. their lives are now tangled ... Cont soon and thnks fr th pm... take care...

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shonaten

@shonaten

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Its a realy nyc story dear
update soon
My fav viren manvi

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

awesome story
loved it
read it from the start
loving maanvi-viran jodi a lot
muskaan is really cute
loving her giggles
loved the way virat was feeling jealous of viren
eager to know what happened in maanvi's past
please continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm

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naina

@naina927

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon
Hey naina... Its really an awsm story... Ohhh!!! how much I love this jelous virat and his thoughts on manvi, almost loosing control and the way he is feeling when muskaan is in his arms... You described their emotions really well... Great work!!! At the same time I cant help but feel bad for all of them- viren, virat, manvi.. their lives are now tangled ... Cont soon and thnks fr th pm... take care...

thank u soo much yaar 😊 i am glad u liked it... its my favourite story u know 😃 will try to cont soon