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pavi

@paviluvsvirika

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

aww i luv it one of da the first posts ive read after months

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

ohh myy god,
cant belive it a manvi & viren in love just a dream dont want to wake up...
uff want to see them only happy, let manvi wear virens saree pleaseee...

uff this is just a great ff
thanks fo rpm

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: hangok
ohh myy god,
cant belive it a manvi & viren in love just a dream dont want to wake up...
uff want to see them only happy, let manvi wear virens saree pleaseee...

uff this is just a great ff
thanks for pm

u have to believe bennu... bcos they are... 😉 n i think its a ff for u only 😊

wait for the next update😊

thank u for the comment

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

awesome story
loved it
finally you updating it
loved muskan she is cute
make manvi wear which viren's gifted her
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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reyna winget

@reyna.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

its awesome !!

i loved muskan...!

shez too cute !

n virat being cought with manvi's dress in his hand n viren teasing him...😆

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anvyagnihotri

@anvyagnihotri

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

👏suppeeerrr hiitt , awsm👏

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GOOGLU

@GOOGLU

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Welcome back dear... as always wndrful update!!!!!!!! Luv manvi's prfct familiy... Speclly luv cute n sweet muskaan!!!!! U done wndrful job... Cntnue soon!!!!!!! Really thanks for pm dear... After long time i got pm from u

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

nice story waiting what
virat will do to make seperated
lovely couple update soon

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5roseparvin

@5roseparvin

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Hai friend, thank u for pm... this story is really different... I really like manvir jodi...don't forget to pm me... and update fast...

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Naina fantastic update..!!! ⭐️⭐️ And its super long 😃.. Thank you! This whole Virat-Manvi-Viren equation is just superb 👍🏼.. Virat is constantly hitting on her and Viren is kind of irritated with this.. Well that's natural.. Manvi-Viren-Muskaan one 'Picture perfect family' for sure.. But Virat's entry is definitely going to create lot of problems in their peaceful life.. Loved Virat's affection towards Muskaan.. It's a bit strange but I liked it 😃.. Manvi is aware of his flirting nature but her ignorance towards Virat is making him all desperate and I'm loving it 😉.. So both Viren and Virat gifted her saree and she promised Viren that she would wear the one he gifted.. This will irk Virat more.. Looking forward to the next part.. Update was beautifully written! 👏👏 Loved it ❤️❤️.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊