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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: -spongy-

yes finally

vise main alreay padh chuki hun
a
this was simply wow
amazing
i loved it so mcuh
waiting for the next update

of swaron as well as kriyaansh..
tu kehti hain toh main spamming karu 😉


hmm ... abhi mere paas thoda time tha toh maine socha ki swaron part bhi update kar dun ...
next part dono kr aur ss ka aadha ho chuka h ...
ab dekhte hain baki ka aadha kab likh paungi ...
i'll try to update soon .. ...
karlo spamming ...
aapka bhi fayda h ... 😆


waise please is page ke 6th post ko please doining like ... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
nice part.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
awesome ss..
read both parts..
n loved both parts totally..
sharon love swayam😳
swaron were friend finally n that too best friend in short time 😃
what swayam like sanjana :(
now they are together :(
swayam was so busy with his so called girlfriend that he had no time for sharon :(..
poor sharon try to talk to him n he was too busy..
now sharon ignore swayam..
tit for tat swayam hehe..
sharon shifting to delhi..
n swayam sanjana broke up..thats good hehe..
now swayam want his friendship back but its too late..
plz plz update soon ..
waiting eagerly :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
the chapter 2 was amazing... first of all i am all confuse...
any how sharon is complete ignore swayan and then she came to know that her dad
got a transfer and she might leave soon and she inform rest of her friends
that she is leave and that there is go to be a party at her house and invited all of them
and did not inform swayan about it anything and swayan and sanjana broke up and he want to
be friends with sharon again and i am sure reaction will be unexpected when he came to
know that she is a leave... get interest to read more... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Awesome update 😊
Sharon let out her frustration on Swayam
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Wonderful update
Sharon's POV was amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Just read both parts and they are amazing :)
Aaawww Sharon has a crush on Swayam
I feel sorry for her because of the way Swayam was treating her
I wonder why Swayam and Sanjana broke up
Please pm me when you continue and please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome part..

loved it..
sharon in love with swayam n he s her crush...
she s shy to talk to swayam n if she tried she s not able to talk.. nice...
swayam n sanjana broke up n now sharon lost her cool coz swayam came to her to talk wen she was going n that too coz he broke up with sanjana..

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3

He held my wrist. I turned around and raised my eyebrow asking what? He looked too confused. I got what he wanted to ask but then I just didn't want to answer that unasked question. I jerked my hand away from his grip and walked out of the fire exit. Once out, I ran to the locker room and burst into tears. I don't know why I was feeling this bad. Maybe, because today, out of all the days when he wanted to start afresh I had to leave, leave forever. I didn't want to but I had no options. I decided that I had to be strong. I got up and washed my face. Once I was looking normal, I went out of the locker room. It was our English class going on. He was sitting behind me. I received a chit. I had guessed that it must be from him only. I opened and it read -

Please Sharon, tell me what's the matter? Please, I beg of you.

- Swayam

I just didn't know what to do. Should I tell him or should I just walk out. After a lot of thinking and pondering I replied-

Meet me in the fire exit after this period.

- Sharon

Soon the period got over and I took my bag and rushed to the fire exit. Soon after I reached he also came. He started Sharon, what's the matter?. He asked in a very sweet tone. I replied, nothing Swayam, I am just going to Delhi. He said, firstly Sharon I'm so happy you finally called me Swayam and secondly we can start afresh once again when you return. So that's not a big deal. I just controlled my tears and said no Swayam we can never start afresh, I am not going to return. My dad has been transferred to Delhi and we are leaving tomorrow. He stared at me in disbelief. After a long break he spoke please Sharon tell it's a lie. No Swayam, I'm telling the truth. I'm leaving tomorrow. I don't want to but I have to. I have kept a party tonight at my house. Please come. At least we can spend some moments together. Bye Swayam. And I walked out from there. Tears were continuously flowing from my eyes.

3 rd person POV

Here Swayam just fell down on his knees and was crying bitterly. He spoke to himself. I'm sorry Sharon, I realized it very late that how integral part of my life you are. I fell for you, the very first day I saw you but I just wanted to know your feelings so I played this Sanjana game. I thought that because of this you may come closer to me but look what I did. It turned out to be totally opposite. I lost you, lost you forever. I'm sorry Sharon, Please come back to me. I can't live without you. Please forgive. I can't live without you.

There Sharon, walked out of the fire exit and directly went to the nearby park. She sat on one of the benches. Why me god, why me? Once in my life I had started loving someone but then also you just can't see me happy. What sin have I committed? Don't I have the right to love and to be loved? She burst out crying. She didn't want to leave. Not even 1 percent but she had to. She was compelled to do so. Even if she tries explaining her parents that she wants to live here, they won't ever agree. She had no choice left to go back home and do some basic preparations for the party which is to be held tonight.

She went back to the locker room, took her things and started going towards the gate.

Swayam, with very difficulty controlled himself and came out of the fire exit with blood shot red eyes. He decided he would not let Sharon go. How could he? She is his first love. He goes first to the locker room but doesn't find her. Then searches the RH but still he got no clue. He was going to the canteen but then he saw her going towards the main gate. He ran as fast as he can and stood beside her. She was shocked to see Swayam there.

"Swayam, what are you doing here? And look at yourself, what have you done idiot?"

"I'm here to stop you from going"

"huh?"

"Please Sharon, Don't go. I can't live without you"

"Llisten Swayam, the decision is not in my hand. If it would have been then I would have even thought of leaving but now the circumstances are forcing me to leave. So, I'm really sorry, but I have to go"

"No Sharon, wait. I'll talk to your parents. I'll make them agree to let you stay here. I'll confront them but please don't go"

"why Swayam? Why would you do so? From past one month, you forgot that I even existed and now suddenly why this concern, why this care?"

"because I LOVE YOU"

To say Sharon was dumb folded would be an understatement. She never expected Swayam would say this to her. She always thought that Swayam loves sanjana. After a long gap Sharon again spoke

"then what about sanajna?

"Sharon,first come here with me"

Swayam took her to the canteen and made her sit on one of the chairs in one corner. He took the other one and sat just in front of her.

"Sharon, listen to what I say with patience"

"hmmm"

"I never loved sanjana. I din't even like her"

"then why did you ask me to patch you up with her?"

"because I wanted to know your feelings for me"

"why?"

"because I fell for you the very first day of mine in this college. I wanted you to be mine and only mine. I didn't start a conversation with you because I thought maybe you are not at all interested in me. But then one day we started to talk. I just wanted to know what you feel for me so that's why this whole sanjana game. I'm sorry. I really do love you"

Sharon was not able to understand what the hell was happening in her life. She was too confused to react in a particular manner. She slowly got up and started to leave. Swayam called out to her but she didn't respond. Swayam caught hold of her wrist and turned her towards him.

"what happened Sharon?"

She nods in a no

"nothing, just think how many twists and turns will my life take" she answer a alittle lost

She started again "I'll meet you in the evening, Swayam. i'll be waiting for you as maybe it's the last time we meet and please I beg, don't try to stop me. Please"

Saying that she ran away to her house.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 4

SWAYAM'S POV

One mistake and my life changed, totally changed. Now I don't have anyone whom I can share my feelings with. One wrong decision and my happiness was gone. She was gone. She didn't even look back at me once. I agree I have done a big mistake, but I was a kid then. Everyone makes mistake but why am I forced to pay such a huge amount by staying away from her. I still remember that day at the party. She was there with her friends. Almost everyone from the school was there. Even me. When she saw me coming, her expressions changed. She just stared at me blankly. Throughout the party we never talked but when it ended, I became a bit emotional. When almost everyone left, I approached her. Her back was facing me. "Sharon" I called out. She turned back "yes Swayam, any work?" "Sharon, please don't leave, I can't stay without you. Please Sharon, Please" "Swayam, as I told you before, this decision is not in my hand. I just can't stay even if I want to. Please Swayam, try to understand" by the time she finished I was crying. I was unable to control my emotions at this time. I just hugged her tightly and cried. I just didn't want her to let go. To my surprise even she hugged me back. We both were crying but I know it was time to let her go. i returned from my memory lane when I heard my phone ringing. It was Rey, my co-worker. I picked up the call "Hello" "Hello, Swayam. Where are you? Did you forget about today's meeting?" "Oh Shit! I'm so sorry! I'm just coming" and he hung up. He reached office and met Rey there."Swayam, have you gone insane? How can you forget about this meeting?" Rey asked a little annoyed by Swayam's behavior. "I'm so sorry. I was just remembering some old memories." "Fine. I know you were thinking about Sharon. Btw, Swayam, I think you should move on now. It's high time that you ... " before Rey could complete Swayam interrupted "Rey please, don't start again. I can never move one. She's my first and only love and will always be, no matter what." Swayam sounded damn serious so Rey thought better and changed the topic. "Ok, let's go inside, we are getting late" "hmmm, yes, let's go". They both went inside and the meeting started. But Swayam's mind and heart were somewhere else. He was thinking about the last talk he had with Sharon and smiled remembering their own sweet memories. He remembered what Sharon had said before leaving. "Swayam, there is one thing I have got to tell you. I have liked you since I have seen you first day but always lacked courage. But now, when I'm leaving I would confess that now I Love You. Even though, I'm leaving but remember if we are meant to be then we surely will meet in future. Good Bye Swayam!" and with this she left. He came back hearing Rey's voice "Swayam! Swayam! Where are you lost?" "huh, I'm sorry, let's continue". After the meeting finished Swayam and Rey both were heading towards the exit. Rey spoke "Swayam, I think we should go somewhere, sit and have a talk" "hmm, ok". They both go to a restaurant. "Swayam, what is the matter with you these day? All the time you seem very lost and in deep thoughts. Tell me, what happened?" Swayam sighed "See Rey, these days I'm remembering Sharon a lot. In everything I do, I just see Sharon around. I feel as if she's somewhere near me. I always remember her. It's enough Rey. I can't stay without her anymore. I want her now." With this he broke down, crying. "Shh, Swayam. Please don't cry. I know everything will be fine. Just give some time. Everything will be back to normal" "how much time Rey? How much time? I have spent 7 years without her, just with her memories but still she hasn't come back. I can't take this anymore" "She definitely will come back to you. She must also be living the same way you are living Swayam. Just think about it Swayam." "yes Rey, you are right. She will come. she has to come. I will wait for her." "lets get going". They both leave the restaurant and Swayam a saw a girl walking in the middle of the road and a big vehicle coming from the other side.

Edited by Anjori_ArSha - 11 years ago

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