ArHi FF: The Same Coin#3 - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago
A drunk khushi is needed to move the story forward i guess... lol 😆 ...lovely update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved loved loved loved loved the whole update
Amazing one
Cant wait for the next chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congrats on the new thread. And awesome update' probably the best chapter. It had the swiftness you usually give us but it was also quite calming. Really liked it and really looking forward to more! Very well written. Excellent work! And your font. I actually really like it. It's easily adjustable and it works fine. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
The update was as mind blowing as the kiss. Did V and NK have to choose new year for their juvenile quarrel? But since NK was equally angry, I guess it may not have been juvenile. May be it had something to do with payal. The font style and size is absolutely fine.
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Posted: 12 years ago
What was that ?? Waw.. I was hoping again for a chapter with little bit of attractions, talks between them. But a new year kiss.. that was unexpected. So love is finally in the air..:)..
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Posted: 12 years ago
THEY KISSED...aaahhh..oohh
i cant say anything other than. ..that pls update soon...
i cant wait for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
the build-up was perfect... loved the update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
A kiss distinctly raizada and Gupta style...
Trust me Sem...you created a magical moment...I liked the fact that it had a mix of teenage and mature feel...


I could imagine A and K's sorry face when khushi abruptly left with NK...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey! Nice update😊...i really loved it. I have no idea how you wanted it to be...may be khushi's n arnav POV about their feelings n reactions with each other when they see each other n have their small talk n then their kiss i have no idea about whats on your mind. But for me it was prefect khushi's POV was given wherever needed...but i was hoping to learn about arnav too. What was he thinking about her when he reached party or before?. What he thought when they locked their eye? She did think he was looking at her in appreciation but was it true. It became obvious when he showed up at terrace when she messaged him about how eager he was to meet her. I felt nice about the part where making friends while you are along your path n asking help was great one.😊 What instigated him to touch her that way or was he just trying his luck. He likes her for what she is... is known but weren't they trying to be just friends n nothing more. Is he on the same page as khushi or just taking it lightly? Previous chapters have not told us about how arnav feels for her other than that bike ride when he wanted her close. This is what i think😕 i don't know about anyone other wise😕.
But believe me i feel it was perfect for me. Last part of the kiss😳 was also perfect😳. He told her that in order to do it properly he needs her close enough😳. Plus she pulled away to see the fireworks that's so her😆...thinking too much at one time that's y so much of distraction. He is more single minded so wants to continue what he was doing😳😛😉.

And about the font part. Some people using a CRT monitor or small screen may have problem coz the chosen font may apper to them smuggled or very close to read easily. I can only conclude it, although i'm not sure😊.

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