ArHi FF: The Same Coin#3

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

n ya pls i hope arnav n khushi nw wont again start der bickering...i m afraid n.k n la jhagda was bought on dis point of story fr a reason? to support nk n la i hope arnav n khushi dont fight
i hope d reamaining ol chps r dis romantic
loved it..

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Chamkili77

@Chamkili77

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Not sure why you are in self doubt mode. The chapter was beautifully written. Loved the first kiss between Arshi. But wish you had not stopped...can't wait...

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prati_incept

@prati_incept

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

yeyyy ...

they kissed...

im so happy..😃

guidebook for THIS... good idea..

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Ah this lovely Chapter was all about my favourite people, them bonding, them sharing special moments, them finally giving into their attraction and kissing *sighs what more can a reader ask for.

And you say you are not satisified with the chapter, well S you should be more than satisfied because you just about covered everything there is to cover between Raizda and Gupta and more. Khushi's following confession when Raizada asked her what she was thinking about was just so natural, so khushi and so brilliant, she unknowingly told him something as amusing as how he smelt fantastic and something as serious as her disappointment about her dad not being happy with her choices in life.

"Like why party dresses can't be pretty and comfortable, like why dogs chase their own tails, like whether the sky really is shimmering or not, like will Dad ever be okay with my choices in life, like Payal needs to toughen up a little, like are Faizi and Ria playing host or playing tonsil hockey, like you smell fantastic as always, like I miss NK because he no longer has as much time for me anymore, like what is going to happen next in this one bit of Dramione fan fiction that I read, like

^^^👏

Raizada noticing all the important and amusing bits and asking KHushi about it, Raizda finally apologizing for something he felt terrible that is locking her up to only find out that she knew all along. Khushi sharing the reason behind her fears. Loved, loved , loved the fact that you covered all this and then you made their Special KISS happen in a Special place at a Special time with fireworks erupting in the sky. It was a beautiful moment, let us hope there are many more of these moments in the coming chapters!😳

Bonus section was amusing as always and now you will have to tell us what happened between NK and Lavanya, did he propose and Lavanya said NO or what? I won't ponder over what could happened I am sure you will reveal it all soon!

PS. Your font couldn't be any clearer, we have absolutely no issues with it. I am genuinely surprised that somebody does. 😕

Edited by Arshix144 - 12 years ago

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va21

@va21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

hey semanti, mindblowin update...the wait was absolutely worthy!!! arnav n khushi finally kissed!!! yippeee...❤️...waiting for 7A!!😃

vibha

Edited by va21 - 12 years ago

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samirao

@samirao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Mind blowing update , let me tell u , how much I like it , I was at the water park with my friends , but I was ignoring all the fun , cuz I want to read ur update again and again , this is the best chapter , of ur story so far , there kiss , was magical , out of this world , infact .m, whole chapter was beautifully , perfectly written , just wana know there reaction after there first kiss , spc Arnav's feeling and thoughts about there first kiss , impatiently waiting for the next chap

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madmaxine

@madmaxine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Oh thank God they acted like normal people and kissed. I was getting antsy! Sahi setting hai for a first kiss. New Year and all. Reminded me if When Harry met Sally for some reason. Enjoyed reading!

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mrignayani

@mrignayani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

This was goood...kiss it was!! What a setting!

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Sunday ke shuruvaat ho toh aisi👏

You know I was so warped up in the inferno thing that I hadn't expected all that happened in this chapter. But I still feel like asking, where's the inferno? Or as you said in your note, there's still some more to come in the next chapter?

Coming to the chapter...Khushi wasn't really in the party but then did I really miss it all? The answer is no. I guess the detachment wa esential for the plot but it was also symbolic of the differnces between her an dall other people in the party. Khushi siad it through her thoughts and her actions as well.

But who's complaining if it worked in her (and our, to be shamelessly honest) favor? I didn't feel dejected when Khushi didn't receive a reply to her last message knowing well that Arnav would be beside her soon. The confession about what Arnav had done and Khushi's subsequent revelation about her phobia was very heartening. I'm sure it must have made her feel better to say all of it aloud to him.

They kissed! They kissed! They kissed!☺️ More so than the actual kiss it was the buildup that was wow worthy👍🏼 Alcohol might have played a catalyst for Khushi but I think Arnav's expertise was what played a major role in the near perfect kiss that they shared. and to top that he also called her by her first name😳 for the first time.

So looks like La and NK have had their first fight? I'm mot being a Karen but why did they fight?

I'm glad Payal put her foot down and didn't come to the party; we wouldn't have had what we did had she tagged along with Khushi.😉

The diary is here and a very interesting excerpt there was in the same. At least we came to know that Khushi considers Arnav as an excellent kisser...alrthough I have now begun to wish that Arnav kept a diary of his own as well😉

Loved the sibling banter😊

It was 5 thousand words long?😲 Mujhe toh chotta lagaa😆 You know what I'm hinting right?

Do not delay in posting the next one otherwise I'll seriously contemplate on landing at your doorstep.😆

I am a bit confused about Shashi alllowing Khushi to go to the party but since you've said you'll be explaining it in the next chapter I'll wait till then.😊

I have no problem with the font.

Sab points covered I think? Chalo milte hai next chapter mein😊

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alisondi

@alisondi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Totally n entirely loved it S!!!

U rock
P.S really relieved to see that u cause I had thought something must be seriously wrong that semanti hasnt updated on the due time