11/11//2013 - ARHI FF:MASTERCLASS THREAD10: Chapt89 pg114..note pg131

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Anukriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Naina Naina Naina

How will I sleep tonight. this is like the bestest Honeymoon I have ever read about or heard.*hyperventilating*

I am drifting to a dreamland. I'll comment more when I'll return from the lalal and ooops yatch :-)

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darya20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Superb amazing and most romantic honeymoon

Awww they were sooo cute

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rabid52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

I was delighted to see that you have resumed updates. Thank you! Well what a treat the Raizadas on honeymoon. 😳

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devasahayam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

so honeymoon is in full swing
awesome update

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Anuradha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

awesome dear, as usual, the update was capturing.. the way you depict romance is absolutely aesthetic and enticing that i beg to differ with people who feel otherwise.. keep writing the way you wanted to because that style of yours is what that got me hooked to this story. ( in fact, i want more romance and love making😉😉😉)

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__blossom__

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

That was sooo Romantic!

Sigh! What all i could do to be in khushi's place! ;)

Great update!

Loved it!

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

It was just amazing. Perfect. They needed this honeymoon and i cant wait to know what else has they planned. :)

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daffodils06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

it was so romantic...

i am so glad to c that they are not just enjoying..but also gettin to know each other so well...

great update...

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moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Naina I thought I left a comment about your note yesterday, but it seems like it never got posted :(

The last chapter, chapter 84, was written beautifully and in now way can I describe it as vulgar. It was passionate, sensual and very much in keeping with the characters and the story: they're newly weds and they're in love for god's sake!

I really don't understand why people feel the need to preach about what others should do. If you don't like something then don't read it??!! As a writer you have to be faithful to your vision and not what other people say. You can never make everyone happy.

As for the plagarism: disgusting and utterly pathetic. Again I am confounded by people who think they can getaway with stealing other people's work: you WILL get found out and when you do it will be humiliating for you, it will deeply hurt the writer and at the end of it, it will prove how utterly pathetic you are in passing off someone else's creativity as your own.

Loved the new chapter - it was awesome as usual - will come back to add more comments on it.

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neverbefore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Awww man! That has to be the best honeymoon EVER!! I would get married all over again (preferably to an Arnav 😉) to have that sort of honeymoon. Made my heart sigh!

I love that they had such quality time to themselves. It's not very often that couples get that...married or not.

I get the feeling though that this is strengthening their relationship for a future test.

Where are Akash and Payal?!! Loved their banter.