ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 5 - COMPLETED

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mwep

@mwep

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Posted: 12 years ago

#611

unress

awesome update

kaka is really smart

loved shy khushi

hope cooking non veg doesnt create problem for khushi

arnav was amazing

Edited by mwep - 11 years ago

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SARUNIAN!!!!

@luv.u.rubletin

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#612

unres:

...And here I read another Ahh-mazzzinggg update!! :D

How they're thinking of each other..

Arnav wishes there's someone who could talk for hours briefing his deep relation with Khushi...wish that happens...eager to read it if there! :D

Why do you always call me from behind? Why dont you come infront and talk to me?

If I have to stand in front and talk to you, I should be standing, where the Poha is right now, on the stove.

They both are so amazing and hilarious!! Jodi made in heaven! :D

..and kaka left to give them some privacy..love him! ;)

And while reading the part where Arnav is teasing khushi..I literally had huge grins and blushes! And then the shower of kisses *ahem ahem*

Glad that Arnav is willing to follow the tradition of laddos followed by kisses*besharmi openly*

And the dialogue...nobody will dare to eat you up..after all they'll get only bones..it really cracked me up! LOL :P

Ahh! Just love the unclear status of relationship they share!! It makes reading more lovely! :D

Poor khushi...its too difficult to understand this complicated Arnav!

Also, hope Arnav doesn't shout on Khushi for preparing chicken!*fingers crossed*

Aww..she misses him while eating ladoos! Hope Arnav completes the tradition this time too!*day dreaming*

I seriously love this Arnav and Khushi!! They fight like 5 yr olds! Adorables! :D

And you left on cliffhanger...now that's not fair!! But eager to read further..precap is too good! ;) The dance..which song..? I'm a curious cat! ;)

One thing I must say is...Though I'm unable to read and comment regularly, I'm loving this story more and more with each passing update! The flow of story is perfect and it because of your amazing writing skills!! Huge Thanks for sharing this work with us!! Love ya ! <3

Edited by luv.u.rubletin - 11 years ago

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#613

So our lovebirds were thinking of each other while trying to sleep...haayyee...
Kaka is out of station to give them some privacy...God bless him...😃
Another laddoo and another kiss...agar Khushi ki jagah main hoti toh ghar pe roj moti chur laddoo banti...😉 😳
He ate the poha she made despite them being bad...the perfect husband he is becoming...👏 👏
So Khushi is afraid of being alone...😆 loved how he wanted to stay back... 😊
So,Khushi cooked chicken without knowing about Raizada's traditions...hope it doesn't cause any problem between them...😒
Loved their phone convo...they so talk like typical husband-wife...😛
WOW...they matched...woh bhi blue...my fav color...Barun ka bhi...😳 😳
Why does she stop him...yeh kaise jagah hai khatam karnw ka...😡 😡tum kitna kathor ho Di...😭 😭
And the precap...⭐️so the next update is full of treat for us...waiting...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 12 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#614

loved the update so cute she did not want to give him the laddo because she knows he will kiss her and hug her loved how she tried to avoid it but he still did it loved how both have started to accept their nok jokes and their little mistake as part of the bond and hope the chicken incident won't be bad loved how both was waiting for each other to call awesome update thanks for the pm

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago

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Alannah

@Alannah

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#615

cute... waiting for the next

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Pari

@ammavedu80

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#616

Lovely update
Cute romance between arshi
Kaka really gave the privacy to them

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#617

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awww..it was a cute update :D
loved reading it!!
he teasing her..her blush..their small fights are just awesome
I wonder what would Arnav do if he comes to know she cooked chicken in RM *biting nails*
next update on MONDAY????
hey devi maiyya aisa kyun???

Edited by tushi0310 - 12 years ago