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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR



well this was my exact reaction when i saw the unexpected PM...
coming back to update...ur hot and cold update just leave me stunned...at once they are silently romancing...which they themselves are unaware of and at another moment they are throwing fires on each other which they are perfectly aware of...
khushi's concern, arnav's anger, khushi's resolution to pacify him and accept her mistake and bring the arnav back to LIFE..everything is just amazing...

MEG dint i tell ya that her ASR wont let her give lighter updates...for prolonged lime...i mean there'll still be the angry young man...but khushi's effort are remarkable...

WOMAN i dont wanna say this but i really LOVE TDoTD more than BTS...u said this is not your genre but it feels like that u are writing stuff like this for years...and i would love to keep on reading this FF...

well there are only few FFs that i so wanna preserve for future as a great story and as a proof of my craziness for Arshi and your story is one of them...

do think about publishing this one :)


WOW thats huge compliment! I am speechless and you just made my day and weekend. And I wanna clarify onething for Meg, the story is definitely on lighter one but the lighter side comes from Khushi, Akash and Payal. Arnav will be the same Arnav. He will retort, at the max he willl giggle at their antics. I cant reveal much now but I definitely want my readers to ask themselves

"Is it easy to change a man who rooted his struggles deep down in his skin for so many years" Thats the question I ask myself with each update to make sure I am not killing his character.

Thank you for your amazing words...Dil garden garden hua🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazi.g update
hope khushi realises her feelings for arnav soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww dey r too cute too handle!!!... ❤️
beautifully written...
jst loved it...
eagarly waiting for maha update...
thnx for d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..!!!!!!
both were fighting like tom and Jerry.. and they were blushing too...!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya


WOW thats huge compliment! I am speechless and you just made my day and weekend. And I wanna clarify onething for Meg, the story is definitely on lighter one but the lighter side comes from Khushi, Akash and Payal. Arnav will be the same Arnav. He will retort, at the max he willl giggle at their antics. I cant reveal much now but I definitely want my readers to ask themselves

"Is it easy to change a man who rooted his struggles deep down in his skin for so many years" Thats the question I ask myself with each update to make sure I am not killing his character.

Thank you for your amazing words...Dil garden garden hua🤗



by lighter, we meant we dont wanna see a choochie coo-ing arnav...ASR persona deem fits him...so the lighter is in his pretext...you know getting angry but still caring for her just the way he did when he learnt about her pain n fast and her not eating anything...
we never meant that FF is going to be dark...with arshi and payash already in love (ya khushi does not know it yet) its gonna be light with comedy, mischief alongwith with hot n cold arnav...
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Posted: 12 years ago
gd one :)
breakfast... khushi's patience n persistence...

arnav's opening up unknwingly eg. abt food... arnav's realisation tht mayb khushi too feels fr him.. or has started to feel fr him..

all too gd :) :) ..

luking fwd to the maha-update :)

PS: @lalarukh ... too gd :) :) ..

Thak gaye hain paon chalte chalte
Sach mein dar gaye hain hum darthe darthe

Abh tho khwab bhi nahi dhekhey jaathe
Jaante hain toot jayenge yeh jaagthe jaagthe


amazing... touching.. n just too too gd :)


ek khwab bun kar dekhein chalo,
thoda tera sa ho .. aur thoda mera sa bhi,
kuch rang usme tum bhar dena...
aur saja denge jara sa hum bhi..
fir iske taane-baane me..
khud ko yun uljhayenge..
kya sach hai, kahan hai khwab chupa..
ye khud bhi jaan na payenge..
ek khwab bun kar dekhein chalo...
is baar hakikat banayeinge...

thts fr u lala :) :) ... dont knw y i m posting it here.. bt ur words touched me too deep... they sure were sad.. as the situation deemed... bt to mk my heart beat normal again.. i needed a little positive closure... so i hope i mk some sense with it...

n i hope deepthi u dont mind..


Edited by tanu3579 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks a lot for the pm yaar...
awesome update...
last part was superb...
u writing is blind blowing yaar...
cant wait for the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
specially the last part...
w8ing for d mahaupdate
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was AWSOME... But I guess their romantic journey has just abt started...it may take long time to pick up speeds... Still lots of emotional hurdles to be crossed... But waiting for the journey of khushis struggle to turn ASR into ARNIE n loose herself to him in the process...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Og gawd! Pls bhagwanji isko akkal dhena!

My gawd they cannot be without fighting or what? Sucks big time man buts its fun hehe


N she's all flustered!



Home is where the heart is!

Cheers

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