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smilli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Nice...but plx try to update regularly...atleast twice in a week.

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Maria.PMs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: crazy-ash
Wooah! That was good...intregued by the concept!
Looking forward to it...
Is that khushis father arnav is playing with!?? If yes, then he is a sick man!

Thanx for the pm!

Ps- where did u find me!?

Thank you for taking out time and reading it:)

you'll get answers in coming parts...keep reading and TC.

P.S..i've seen you in one of my friends FF thread so thought you may like mine work.:)

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Maria.PMs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: smilli

Nice...but plx try to update regularly...atleast twice in a week.

Thanks dear..i'll try to update it soon:)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: avinaarshi
Loved it😊

Thank you...i hope you'll like coming parts too:)

Add my account*Maria.PMs *for further pms.:)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: Raadhiyaaa
interesting
something new...concept

Thank you dear..i hope you'll like coming parts too:)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: rati123
Interesting. Pl continue.

Thank you,i'll continue it very soon:)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: rainyday3000
An awesome start to what seems like an amazing and different FF...thank u so much for the PM with the links to this and the other story...from what I read in prologue and part 1...I m loving your writting style...I m going to send a buddy request...plz add me to your PM list...thank u!!! :)

Aww i'm glad you liked that:)

Thank you too for taking out time and reading and appreciating my work..means a lot to me..i'll surely update it soon:)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: sudhareddy
Maria thanks for pm
Prologue is nice
Chap 1 You started the story from 1996 very different
I felt sorry for kushi but she is capable of giving back to Rani
Who is the person playing with arnav ? Hope the girl the person offering arnav when he loose game is not Kushi
waiting for next update

Thank you for taking out time and reading it...means a lot to me:)

i'm glad you liked that and i hope you'll like the coming parts too.TC

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Posted: 11 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: sincereme
Awesome start...
Arnav and khushi living in two different world will come across each other...
Khushi is suffering in the hand of her step mother... But how can her father do this to her??
Waiting for the next update...

Thank you for taking out time and reading it:)

i'll surely continue it soon.TC:)