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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Sounds interesting. So who was playing with Arnav? Was it Khushi's dad? Where exactly is this story happening (which city)? Will wait for next update.

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rvas

@rvas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

thanks for the pm... very interesting

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Awesome update...thanks for the PM

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Lakshmi

@Chipmunks.

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

I really dont want to assume that the man who offered Arnav..um..not Khushi's father. It is not him right? Ah! I am having this feeling that it would be him only.
Step-mother are often cruel (in fictions only) and Khushi has to bear so much. Looks like that woman's wish is going to come true.
No comment about Arnav until I read more.
Thanks a ton for the PM :)

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rainyday3000

@rainyday3000

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

An awesome start to what seems like an amazing and different FF...thank u so much for the PM with the links to this and the other story...from what I read in prologue and part 1...I m loving your writting style...I m going to send a buddy request...plz add me to your PM list...thank u!!! :)

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sudhareddy

@sudhareddy

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Maria thanks for pm

Prologue is nice

Chap 1 You started the story from 1996 very different

I felt sorry for kushi but she is capable of giving back to Rani

Who is the person playing with arnav ? Hope the girl the person offering arnav when he loose game is not Kushi

waiting for next update

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Awesome start...

Arnav and khushi living in two different world will come across each other...

Khushi is suffering in the hand of her step mother... But how can her father do this to her??

Waiting for the next update...

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

sound interesting..
continue soon.,
p.m me 4 the next part

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Superb start!!

Very interesting!!

So we have a modern day cinderella here!! With an evil step mother!

But this cinderella definitely knows how to answer back!!!

And we have Arnav not as some prince but as a rogue!!

M sure she will run off and meet Arnav!!

Definitely looking forward to reading their story!!

Thanks for the PM!!

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Wooah! That was good...intregued by the concept!
Looking forward to it...
Is that khushis father arnav is playing with!?? If yes, then he is a sick man!

Thanx for the pm!

Ps- where did u find me!?

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