Swaron OS - Campingg ❤️....(part 2 in page 9)

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Magical_NaiRan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Vishaka45
amazing update chandu..
Beautifully written

continue soon...waitng for camping date...

thank u soo much vishuu🤗

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Magical_NaiRan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon
Oh my god u wrote*shocked*

Res res

hehehe

i dint complete it still yaar

and betwween i reserved for u

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Magical_NaiRan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan
Wow Angel... it is so nice to read an os from u...coming to os it was so beautifully written...I love all the emotion pain and yes the kiss was so nicely put in the scene...

P.s. u didnt include my suggestion...and all credit goes t u lnly fr this wonderful os...dont knw where did i help u in this...

bhaiii

i m gonna include ur suggestion in the later part

thank u soo much ofr suggestion😃

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Magical_NaiRan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: smartypantstanu
Amazing start 👏
I could actually picturize the entire scenario 😃
Even though I like the scene they showed on friday but still I felt a face-to-face conversation is much more impactful I thought
But nevertheless love the start and do continue soon
Would love to read about the camping date

thank u soo much for liking it dear😃😃😃

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Divya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

chandu dis was awesome... 😃

if dey had shown similar scene on tv..all swaron fns would hav gne mad by now... 😆 😆

cuming back to ur OS..i loved it...plz cont kar...waiting for next part now...update soon... 😊

Edited by sweetdivya - 12 years ago

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Magical_NaiRan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

oops i din see. . Mein toh Chandu ka os dekhte hee res kar di first..
I ve been waiting for dis os only

🤗

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Magical_NaiRan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: sweetdivya
chandu dis was awesome... 😃
if dey had shown similar scene on tv..all swaron fns would hav gne mad by now... 😆 😆
cuming back to ur OS..i loved it...plz cont kar...waiting for next part now...update soon... 😊

awww thank uu dear

yaa i will try to do my level best in the later part😃