Swaron OS - Campingg ❤️....(part 2 in page 9)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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DIS OS is written on shilpa's demand
Shilpuuu...i hope u will like dis one...i donno what i m writing...i delayed it sooo much...i dont want it to delay still
so here are is my stupid camping OS
Amit bhai thanks for helping me


SWARON- CAMPING DATE

sharon was shattered seeing swayam and aashi doing the chokra jawaani dance...
she broke down seeing swayam and aashi like dat
she cant control herself...she was crying badly...she got reys call...she answered teh call bt she is nt able to talk with rey...so she cutted the call...rey was shocked to see sharon soo much in-secured

after cutting rey call again she went to Rehearsal hall...swayama nd aashi are in close position...seeing dat she went off from there and started cryingg...

swayam and aashi completed their dance...swayam took his phone he got sharon's call
swayam: sharon i know u will call me
sharon:she was not speaking anything crying crying crying
swayam: he is totally tensed about sharon now
sharon:swayam i m really sorry ...i m very very very sorry swayam...
swayam:sharon please please dont cry sharon...please stop crying
sharon:she cant stop herself talking in the phone...like dat only she went to the rehearsal hall
swayam:he is alos crying...and asking sharon please dont cry"
sharon:she hugged swayam from the back...and said
"i m really sorry swayam...i m very insensitive
i dint understand ur feelings
i took everything soo casually
and i shouted on u i fought with u like a mad"tack...

she was saying all dis without a pause...and crying badly she got aasthma attack
she was struggling to breathe

swayam:sharon wait wait...please stop crying sharon please stop...wait i will bring inhaler
he went to bring inhaler
bt he dint find it...he dint bring it actually...bcoz in the recent days sharon not getting any attacks

he was totally tensed now...he is nt in a position to think anything ,he is totally tensed about sharon ...he went to the RH running...there sharon was calling his name
he went running near sharon...he inhaled his own oxygen into sharon's mouth...he did that for some time...until sharon started breathing
sharon was alrite now and was looking into his eyes...and some what shy
swayam:sharon i m sorry for doing dis without ur permission ...i m totally out of my mind seeing u in dis state...and i dint get the inhaler alsoo...soo i did dis...i m really sorry if i made u uncomfortable
hearing dat word sharon...just kept her lips on his lips...and gave a lip kiss
swayam was shocked at her reaction

sharon:swayam thank u sooo much...and y u think i feel uncomfortable...i love u soo much swayam ...u are verything for me...u r my life...and u did this to get me out of attack...and i loved it
swayam:he was shocked and kept his mouth open
sharon:she closed his mouth...and says"dumbo i love u and i m sorry for everything ...i dint realise dis feeling i had seen u dancing with aashi...no i know how much u would have felt when i was dancing with rey and dat poster
now its enough swayam...will u forgive me swayam"

swayam:sharon stop saying sorry...i almost felt dat i m wrong...and i dint blame ua nd rey
bt i donno i m becoming posssessive towards u...and i cant see u without anyone...yaar...and i dont to fight with u sharon...its enough our fyts over all these years...i m tired of these fyts...now i just want hav a happy moments with u sharon dats it...i cant loose u...sayaing dat he was crying

hearing all these sharon gave him a tight hug...swayam...u will never loose me...and we are nt like other couples...who can break the relationship very easyly...we crossed all those in our life swayam...now our relationship is very strong no one can break it...and even i cant break it swayam...i love us ooo much soo much dat i cant even express...i just want to make u happy with all my love...wich i dint give u these many days

hearing dat swayam hugged her even more tightly and kissed on her hair...and neck
sharon came ot of the hug and gave him a forehead kiss...after dat swayam hugged her again and said
"sharon i missed u soo much in these four days yaar...i missed u...i love u sharon"

sharon:i love u too swayam...swayam lets goo
swayam:no sharon please i want to be like dis for some time
sharon:dumbo lets go to caping tomarrow...i want to fulfill ur third wish...lets spend some time with eachother...somewhere alonee swayam

swayam:wow sharon thank u soo much for keeping my wishes in ua mind and trying to fulfill them...i love u sharon...

sharon:i love too sharon

they came out of the hug...and started walking to the college terrace holding each others hands...and sat ...lying their heads on each other...silently...enjoying the mooning...
swayam:sharon i always dreamt of sitting like dis in moonlight with u...and spending somee time
sharon:swayam...i love u love u sooo much...u always thot abt me ...wishing doing dat and dis...but i always hurted u...
swayam:sharon leav abt the past ...lets enjoy our present dear...saying dat...they went off to their homes and started packing for campinggg...

sooo guys say how is it...if it is good i will continue campinggg😃






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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Chandu u wrote it am super happy wow 🤗 🤗

Well it was superb yaar..
I loved it loved it loved it..
Actually i was expecting a face to face convo only between swaron but Wat v got also was Gud..

Coming to d os Wen u started i thought ki yeh toh exactly scene jaisa hai but no it was not..
U did ur variations in it n i must say it was really very well done..
I loved d whole convo between swaron in RH it was beautifully written..
N d hugs n kisses dey r always amazing..
Best part Wat i loved was swayam giving her oxygen mouth to mouth oh god i could not even have imagined of somethin like dat i was blushing while reading dat..
N den Wat came as a pleasant surprise was sharon.s kiss..
Amazingly thought n portrayed..
Well now am more badly waiting for d next update which ll have camping date..
I know to Wat extent ur imagination can go so am really expecting somethin superb from u in next update..
Update soon am waiting badly..

Luv,
Ur SP
🤗
Edited by Hello_Vrushaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yh yh plz cont

It was awesome start
Actually i somewhere i really wanted
SwaRon to be face to face
After sharonz breakdown
Which i am.unsure y cv dint manage to do

So this is gna be a good one
And moonlight one was wow
Coz ot was one of m personal wiah for awaRon
As i t believe its veey romantic thing to do

Looking forward for next update
Do it ASAP
Edited by Swaron.maniac - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update chandu..
Beautifully written

continue soon...waitng for camping date...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my god u wrote*shocked*



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Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Angel... it is so nice to read an os from u...coming to os it was so beautifully written...I love all the emotion pain and yes the kiss was so nicely put in the scene...

P.s. u didnt include my suggestion...and all credit goes t u lnly fr this wonderful os...dont knw where did i help u in this...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

Oh my god u wrote*shocked*

Res res

u have already got res abv 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swaron.maniac

Yh yh plz cont

It was awesome start
Actually i somewhere i really wanted
SwaRon to be face to face
After sharonz breakdown
Which i am.unsure y cv dint manage to do

So this is gna be a good one
And moonlight one was wow
Coz ot was one of m personal wiah for awaRon
As i t believe its veey romantic thing to do

Looking forward for next update
Do it ASAP

yaar i donno how i will do the camping partt
i will try my level best
thanks for ua coment dea😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vishaka45

u have already got res abv 😉



oops i din see. . Mein toh Chandu ka os dekhte hee res kar di first..
I ve been waiting for dis os only
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing start 👏
I could actually picturize the entire scenario 😃
Even though I like the scene they showed on friday but still I felt a face-to-face conversation is much more impactful I thought
But nevertheless love the start and do continue soon
Would love to read about the camping date

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