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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: BlueMystique

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Thanks :) I won't closing that loop, however. Sorry.

The sheetal track was just too non-sensical to even think on. Meh.

I hope you will join me for the other loop closures though :) </font>

Of course I will read... I wished it was redone to give the story justice but you are right there is no loop to close; the whole part needs to be closed..

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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Amazing stuff!! It's always a pleasure reading these one shots :)

If possible plz write a closure for tht scene, where Arnav called Khushi the biggest mistake of his life.( not sure if u've written it before).

Thanx for the pm & Happy new year😊

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arshina223

@arshina223

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#283

really really good. We all wanted this to happen in the show didn't we?

But we got it now!

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#284

aata girl Anjali for salaping arnav ...

i always wanted to see a stronger anjali di ...

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#285

Awesome update.

Very well written, one of the thing which was missed in IPK.

Feel. Very sad that Khushi left him, but he also deserve this. Hope now it will all start with fresh page.

Also it will be challenge for arnav to win her faith and live back.

Thanks for updating.

Wish you a very happy new year.

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sankadevi25

@sankadevi25

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#286

OMG this was so sad, but so fitting at the same time! I loved the way you showed everyone's feelings, regardless of the length of this drabble. I would LOVE LOVE LOOOVEEE to see this as story that is developed further! UGHHH so perfect, great job!

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#287

I totally enjoy reading ur writing, ridz... Ur words spell magic... Thanks for giving us such wonderful n brilliant updates..

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#288

OMG..this was so amazing.. but i dont want them to be separated..

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#289

Emotional one
Beautifully written
Loved it
Plz continue soon

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#290

super fantastic.

I like the way that just one word triggered so many memories of him and Khushi that prove khushi innocent.

More than that, i love your Anjali, the strong, sensible and mature. Her reaction was unpredictable, i thought she would cry and will not belive but surprisingly she acted oppositely which was great.

Arnav forced khushi into their marriage and then himself took decision to end it, i wish if he could have asked khushi's opinion too.

The ending was very sad.

I enjoy ed a lot reading this one shot.

update next soon