Sorry for the delay...but it's been incredibly busy...
Two loops shut together simultaneously ...loved it...I could clearly picture this story unfolding in front of me and wished that they had used this story to give closure to these loops...your writing made it enjoyable and gave me a feeling of contentment...
Loved how Aman tries to talk him out of cancelling the meeting but gives up knowing its useless... When ASR is in that mood he means business...loved how simultaneously Khushi has her own agenda with him...
Loved how he feels relived that the family is travelling and will not be around to protect her ...said so much for Khushi's relationship with everyone ...
Loved how he gets mad at the thought of the house help calling her a fool...God forbid if they had...you have a knack with your words, this was was such a feel good one...
I really want to know what happened to that bracelet he put in his pocket to give to her before the second wedding ...
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