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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688

Wow what a superb ending
Thanks for closing this loop it deserved the ending u have it
Finally asr apologized to her
PS:thanks for quoting :)



Thank you :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: P4rveen12

Welcome come back Hun,


Wow this was a perfect end to this three part story, a beautiful loop closure.

The update was amazing and superb, a brilliant read from start to finish.

Awww poor Lavanya could not trust NK and decided to ignore him.

I'm so glad you bought Khushi and Arnav into the story and they came to help NK,

Love the fact Arnav actually apologised to Lavanya which was very long overdue.

Loved khushi's amazing advice to Lavanya about giving NK a chance, it was beautifully written.

Awww loved the happy ending for Lavanya and NK at the end, a beautiful finish.

Thanks for writing this awesome loop closure, it has been a pleasure to read.

Thanking you in advance for the PM.

P.S. Request from a reader you should give up uni and become a full time writer for the IF world, lol xx




Hahaha. If I can get paid as much as I would with a job in my field, it wouldn't even be a choice! ;)

Thank you for the awesome comment as always!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkknd786

res will get back to it on my day off...right now super duper late...all because of you hehehe

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Aaawww...*sigh* it was just totally perfect!!!! I am glad that Arnav apologized for the heart ache he caused Lav...never got to see that in the show...you def kept true to their character...he still hesitates to apologize but once he gets into it he does it well...and chamkili...what do I say about her...and NK I finally get to see *errr* I mean read...him yell at Nannav...I can just imagine the scene...I am so glad you wrote this...now I won't have nightmares about a lonely lav and NK roaming around...😆
Take care...and please keep writing...can the next one be a little steamy...*gutter mind demanding it*...😳



LOL...it has one line!

Thanks :) Glad you liked it!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ranogill

Awesome...I think Arnav did said sorry a little bit when he break his engagement with her...but I agree with you Arnav would have Had to say a full blown sorry in case they met again and khushi too



A bit, yes. But not nearly enough...even this isn't enough. PAR it's okay! I mean, she going to be his Sis-in-law...he'll have enough groveling time! ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prati_incept


B E A U T I F U L!!!

Now this is what can be called a real closure to both Lav n Nk track..

very well done 👏 👏 👏





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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ayshaomar

loved how this loop went but also we got one thing that was vital - Arnav apologising to Lavanya for using and misleading her


in the show at the beginning she was stuck up but she did turn into a lovely person and definitely deserved an apology



Thank you, Aysha! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Raila1014

Hey you, I missed a few of your updates when I went on vacation including part 2 of this one. Nicely done showing how La was hurt because of the way he used her in his effort to distance himself from Kushi. Everyone was so focused on the main event and forgot that she was used and thrown away like a dirty rag. So no matter how much she loves Chamkili, she deserved a heart felt apology which he did so well in part 3. Poor NK had to suffer her wrath but I am sure she will more than make up for it.



Thank you! :) Hope your vacation was relaxing!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

awesome...very well written...👏



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy-ash

this was just too good!

thanx for the happy reading moment and for giving this sweet couple's story the closure it needed!



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: emistry

Just read all 3 parts!! Love NK and Lavanya's story!!! Very nicely done!!!



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