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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#781

Part 16 - 18 - Superb 😊

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#782

M in love with the painful yet contented felt sense...while reading this journey of Arnav n Khushi

Edited by Water. - 12 years ago

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#783

Wonderful updates...

Awww liked girija devi trying to help khushi..

wow khushi n arnav's family are lovely..

continue soon

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#784

part 16
hmm so they know the full thing
not just the contract marriage but what he did to her
they are right in what they said
but he is right in what he said
she will come back to him
why because she loves him too much not to come back
but it might just take bit long
parr thodi judaai toh chalti hai
wonder how would her parents react to her leaving
guess shall find out in next one

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#785

part 17
ahhh so true what she said
how can she be an orphan when she has so many people
hmm so GD is getting to know more about arhi
and yes she wont stay too long
but it will still some time
ahhh so they all called her after getting to know of the truth
well they wanna know she is okay or not
and she is fine
sad but fine for now
and yes she does miss them
arnie didnt call again huh

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#786

part 18
wait what mami said was right too
funny but right
she knew what he was like when she fell for him
arrey thats why she fell for him naa
but then that dont mean she doesnt want some space from him
ahhh they arent able to function well without one another
and trying hard to not let the loneliness creep up on them
though it aint working of course
they need one another despite what happened
funny how only when thinking of the other do they fins peace
and yet cant bring themselves to face the way life has taken them at this point
well arnie am sure she shall be calling you and soon
hey she got to know you arent eating so she will have to try to convince you naa

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#787

aww the family had a reunion!

I love Girji Devi is awesome

So she's eavesdropping again awesome

Poor Arshi are suffering but they need this

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

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Posted: 12 years ago

#788

Omg im loving this story!

Ur an exceptional writer!

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coolbakes_Jalad

@Lifeistooshort

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Posted: 12 years ago

#789

4 days away from if and i can believe that i missed so many updates!! felt like a treat though!!! Smita hats off to you!! i do write stories but they can never be as good as urs! ur work is the best!! even after a long hectic day at hospital i cant sleep without reading ur words!!

thanks rulama for the sincere mails and pms!! loved it!!!

smita i so wish the serial had gone this way!!! alas good things are often a dream!!

i was crying at khushi talking to arnav about wanting to know herself.. everyone of us must in fact!! and best of all when arnav fonally asked her will you leave me? it hurt me yar!!

and then best comment that made me smile Nk: Nannav ur hubby from hell!!! god ur play of words!!

and the way he left her spoke to her and the hurt he is going threw and khushi gradually realizing how tuff its been for arnav since childhood!! and finally mamiji!! she loves arnav dammit!! i love mami!!