Swaron SS: Rendezvous Fortune Ch3 Pg11 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting start to your ss sankriti.. Sharon's life has a had a huge change in it..
She had her mother before to tend to her needs and take care of her but now she has to do all the work by herself she had all the luxurious of life but she now lives like a common man does..
I think its swayam who is gonna join and accompany sharon in her work now waiting for the story to unfold update the next part soon..😃
Very nicely written keep up your good work..👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Good update showing sharon's phase of struggle in a precise manner.
There is swayam's entry in the next i guess!

Nicely penned.
Keep it going :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
great first chapter. It foreshadowed that things were going to happen! Great! Keep writing and thanks for the pm. Looking forward to reading more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
superb!!
love the flashback!!
amazing!!
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
nice start!!!
waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

nice update

the lines which you wrote in red from swayam's mom they were effective
thanks for the pm
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Wow...😃

Firstly... amazing writing style...👏

The way you merged her past n present is incredible...😛

The way she is living now... alone n needy...

& when her mom was there to pamper her... to care her...😊

Simply mindblowing...😃

Thats good... that she have a very gud frnd to be cared by...😊

& ya... someone special is on the way...😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
nice art
i really loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Wow!
1st chapter's amazing..
The way u have described sharon's present routine along with the flasbacks makes it all the more fab..
seems like swayam's gonna enter her life..
Waiting for an update..
-Veronica
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
awesome update
loved it
loving ur style of writing
thanx for the pm
update soon

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