Swaron SS: Rendezvous Fortune Ch3 Pg11

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

res
unres
me first😃..
after long time you write something n am glad you did 😃
awesome awesome..
prologue, character n 1st chapter all are amazing👍🏼..
kid sharon n her dad convo was cute..
but what happen that now sharon is left all alone n her dad is also not with her now..
i know have to wait for that😊
loved it how you show past n present moment side by side..
poor sharon feelin really bad for her :(
waiting eagerly for swayam entry n swaron first meet😳
plz update soon ..
n thanks for the pm :)

Edited by anushka1129 - 12 years ago

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

it was a really nice chpter

nice art

i really loved it

thanks for the PM

eagerly waiting for the next one

but yeh sunday kab aayega

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zk456789

@zk456789

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Super start do update next chapter soon

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

res

unres

veryy nic update

loved it...

nic yar...

Edited by swaronlove001 - 12 years ago

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Neha

@Neha_KR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Superb update
loved it
thnxx for pm
update soon
n plzz pm me

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

hey nice start

Loved the way you included the flashback with the on going story 😃

Update soon... Eagerly waiting to read what happen ahead

P.S Thanks for the PM 😊

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

res... will comment back for sure little later...
the chapter was really great well written...
and i wonder in the end who came to meet sharon...
do continue soon and pm me

Edited by sweetydiyafrien - 12 years ago

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RebelHart

@RebelHart

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Nyc one
Good start
Loved it
Looking forward to next update

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Varada

@damonTVDrocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Awesome..👏The way you differentiated between her past and present was wonderful...😛
I'm damn sure the new employee is Swayam...😳

Can't wait for the Sunday to come... Update soon n do pm me...😊