||~Something About You~||#13 *COMPLETED*21/08/DT NOTE: PG 32

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Such a brilliant story, I wish there was more!

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Farah

@farah53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: henamani
i dont know whether u visit this thread anymore farah; but i read the entire FF in one go - once again.
it is indeed one of the most beautiful FFs written about arnav and khushi. while u kept our beloved arnav intact, u manged to express the happiness that khushi brought to him, the way she set aside the darkness that engulfed him, the way she coloured his life; its as if a drop of colour was added to his lifeless vein and slowly it travelled all throughout him and transformed him from ASR to Arnav. SAY is not about khushi, its an arnav tale. the complaint that i have from most of our FF writers is that they always paint arnav as the culprit. i have always maintained that arnav's love for khushi ran far deeper. he breathed her, he lived her. urs is one FF that brings that feeling home.
this is a piece i wish to come back to again and again just to remind me how poignant and timeless their love story is - Red and Rakhshas Rajkumar

I do visit the thread everyday, but I try not to comment anymore keeping in mind the DTs warning.

Thank you so much for saying something which after a long time compelled me to come here, & reminded me why I have written SAY & how I felt while writing it.

Yes, I admit, SAY was always Arnav's story for me.. Always. I am too much in love with that flawed character for anything I write to be anything else. But what you have said today, that Arnav breathed Khushi, he lived her.. If I have truly brought that feeling to the fore with SAY, then I consider myself to be very successful in writing SAY.

Thank you for coming back to SAY again & again.. cos every time you do so, I go back to SAY.. again & again.

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Farah,

There is no doubt you have done that in SAY, I visualise Khushi through his eyes..her beauty, her smile, her laughter,her emotions each of them is a reaction to his feelings...there has to be a reason why we come back to this thread daily in spite of there being so many stories about these two...your Arnav and his RED...

This is a masterpiece !

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

^^^ Couldn't agree with V more! SAY is so Special and we definitely fell for Khushi via Arnav! If that makes sense! This is one of the very few FF's where I fell for the flawed Arnav because his character was strong, consistent and most of all his love was strong, his love meant he was there for his Khushi, he couldn't see her in pain leave alone give her pain, he was always protective of her, he was possessive in a good way, his affection and attraction was on another level, he was attentive like no other, he understood her without her having to utter anything, he would notice if she was upset, happy or angry by merely looking at her oh what the heck I might as well come out and say it he maybe flawed but he was just PERFECT in his own way!

Can we hope to have something similar? I hope you will be writing more FF's sometime in the near future!

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Farah, extremely sorry for an extremely late comment for the epilogue as well as this OS...

What can I say, yeh dil hai ki maanta hi nahi that SAY has ended... 😭

I was in denial for the longest time, holding on to the hope that it will somehow magically reappear in my Inbox with a note from you, but no such luck... :(

So, when I finally accepted that it was truly gone, I went & reread the whole FF again in the last two days... And I was in a dreamworld from which I never wanted to come out of...

Their whole magical love story was so beautiful as it was poignant that I couldn't stay away until I reread it completely till this OS... I so wish you had given me a glimpse of their shaadi after all that... I just wanted to read about Arnav's relief at finally having Khushi to himself, as his own, as her immediate family, as the one one who trumps all... That to me would have been the true ending of this story, hence I could not and still cannot accept that this story is complete... It still feels incomplete to me for that one reason... Sigh! I felt so bereft at not getting that satisfaction to see Arnav feeling finally satisfied & content & ecstatic by making Khushi his own in the eyes of the law & society, you can never know... 😭

Other than that, the story is wonderful, as I have said so many times before, it was a beautiful journey that we all sailed along with Arnav & Khushi, their attraction for each other was so electric, their fights so endearing, & their making up so romantic...The color Red is now synonymous with Khushi... :)))

It was a pleasure to see how they each complimented the other... Khushi whose infectious, gregarious nature was a soothing balm to Arnav's high strung nerves & was that guiding star for Arnav to come out of his personal hell & truly start living again... And Arnav being the solid anchor for Khushi from which to, aim at & reach her stars...

I hope you are recharged now, & thinking about another story... But I so wish you would finish this one first... That's just my opinion though. 😊

Adios!

Edited by pixiegirl - 11 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Congratulations Farah...for a great story and creating such brilliant and memorable characters and for turning PINK!😉

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Re read it today and loved it as much or more...your writing has such a natural warmth...just like the story and the characters ...

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samarablog

@samarablog

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

That was wow..though i read it a month later..its soo good..haha

Nice..miss it!the show as well as ur stories..

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#239

It's sad to have DT warning on one of my all time favorite stories.

Farah, Is there any plan to write another os in the series at least Arshi marriage?