ArHi TS | Meant To Be | Part 2 (Last)

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sindhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

awesome yaar loved it ..lovely

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mrignayani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

This was such a lovely and refreshing short story..loved it!

Plan to read your other work soon! ⭐️

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opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Beautiful. Good that Khushi's father died otherwise I would have killed him 😡

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Luna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

loved the TS. Specially the last part. thanks for the PM.

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Sarah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Wow, loved the concluding part to this two shot.

The update was amazing and brilliant,

So Arnav was waiting at the spot where he told Khushi to meet him and had been for the past four years, so sweet.

I can't believe it was because of Shashi, Arnav was forced to end his relationship with Khushi.

Awww loved the last part, Arnav asking Khushi to let him earn her trust back.

A beautiful and superb ending, both declaring that they had missed each other.

Written exceptionally well and a wonderful read,

Thanks for writing this, it was a pleasure to read.

Thanks for the PM xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago

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Zoah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Ridz! This was such an amazing piece of writing. I like how you ended the story on a silver lining... Lovely <3

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javeria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Superb update

Thank god arnav letter reached in time n khushi broke her marriage n went to arnav who loves her dearly.

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Amrita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

That was a perfect ending...😊..

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

not her dad

man how could he

but then he did

making her so sad for sure

poor them man

but then guess like the title says they were meant to be

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shona-li

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Very lovely and interesting :-) I liked how you took care to mention the misgivings and hesitation from Khushi to believe in their 'love', and Arnav's acceptance of that. It definitely gave a dimension of realism to their ending. Really liked and appreciated that. Fluffy endings are nice, but those doses with a healthy amount of realism are the ones I love the most. Bravo!:-)

Edited by shona-li - 12 years ago