||The Secret|| Kriyam TS [Two shot] Update Pg 8

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Alright!! This was waayy...wwaaayyy better than that kria wala new OS u wrote 😳...

Gang k expression N confusion KriYam ko saath dekh k and woh 'Secret' jan-ne k baad , Mast thay 😆...

Sachi mein agar KriYam twins na hote toh abhi usnka murder ho jata ShaRey k hathon 🤣...

KRiYam's little moment was Great 👍🏼...

Even though this is a KriYam OS , i was looking forward to read something about KR 😳...

N woh mujhe parhne ko mila bhi 😆...

SwaRon N KR do no saath saath ho gaye , confusion dur , Aditya gaya bhar mein along with his contract , Great hai g ...

I remember u ended one of ur older KriYam OS ese he...

But ya tu aur kar bhi kya sakti thi...

KR ya koi aur couple hota toh u could have shown some romance , lovely-dovely stuff...

But ab Bhai-Behan k bheech mein kya deekhati 🤣...

Seriously!! This was a very nice wala Shot 😃...

Me loved it ❤️...

N pm keliye bhi shukriya 😊

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Its not bad 😳
I loved itt 😊
Nicee ending 😊

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Awesome ...

The secret ... liked it

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prinum

@prinum

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Nice update..
Thnx for da pm...

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Aanchal singh

@Artistic_Stroke

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

awesome update ishu

the way kria insulted that aadi i loved it😆

then swayam's care for his sis amazing

finally kr united

loved the whole part

thanks for pm

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

It was really Amazing update..
loved it..
Finally big secret out n Kriyaansh together again..

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

loved it

that was awesome👏

y didn't u pm me this time🤔

next time plz do pm me

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jasmeet kaur

@dilkriyarey

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

awesome update... end was a little ajeeb... well still really nyc part... update soon... loved it... do pm me...👏😛

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Varada

@damonTVDrocks

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

It wasn't that bad! I liked it.. Yes logic was missing a little! But then again, D3 n logic= no relation..😆 So, chill!!😛Liked KriYaam bonding very much n missing it like hell..😭 Do write such wonderful stuff again...😊

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

superb update ...

loved it...

thnks for the pm

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