||The Secret|| Kriyam TS [Two shot] Update Pg 8 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
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Superb update
Luvd it...
Finally everything is sorted between kr nd dey r together
Nd luvd de kriyam bro-sis relation
Amazing written
Edited by Kanchi.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
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Awsum update
kriyansh confession their feelings
whole update was Amazing
thnxx for pm
update soon
n plzz pm me
Edited by Neha_KR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
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it wasn;t that bad ishana
i relly liked it
well written
and scenes were really nice

but i must say end thoda ajeeb sa tha 😕😕
but then also i loved the TS a lot
thanks for the PM
do write more and do PM me
i'm waiting 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: -spongy-

res

unres

it wasn;t that bad ishana
i relly liked it
well written
and scenes were really nice

but i must say end thoda ajeeb sa tha 😕😕
but then also i loved the TS a lot
thanks for the PM
do write more and do PM me
i'm waiting 😃


I noe dt...i din't have any idea hw to end it! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Awesome update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Nice ending
love it
update was nice
love how sw was pissesive for kria
n sharon was possesive for sw
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Hey loved ur update dear...adi ka band baja achi tarah se😉😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
loved it
adi ki band bjne vala ws superb 😆
acha hua uske sath aisa hi hona chahaiye tha.huh 😡😆
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
res... perfect ending... loved it...
swaron and kriyaansh got reunited...
the whole get happy and have a huge group hug and to their reunited friendship...
Edited by sweetydiyafrien - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Hey ...
Nice part ...
Great ending ...
Loved it ...

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