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Originally posted by: arshifan91

Beautiful OS 👏


I totally agree to your sentiments. I too sometimes have felt how it would be when Khushi has a brother who will fight against all odds for his sister and shows her value and importance to Arnav thereby acting as a pillar of support and strength for his sister.

This story , though a bit short was really adorable and i enjoyed reading it. It was really cute and i would say what your mother did was truly beautiful and she is brainy too 😛 I just loved the Rakhi tying scene where Khushi ties it to her mother and the Jalebi scene with her brother next year. I just felt u could have written more about Khushi's reaction to his proposal as u ha left it as an open end fro the readers.😳


Wishing u good luck to meet your Arnav soon 😉😃 Dont worry - Sabar ka pal meeta hota hai 😳😛

Originally posted by: thulasi_arshi

y dont u continue this as ss?

2 or 3 parts .ll u?😊

Originally posted by: chibisuke

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Wow.

Just. Wow.

It was so beautiful, Shikha.. truly!! And the fact that you experienced it (the sibling bond) first hand was amazing!!

I really had tears in my eyes when I read it!!

But, wait. Why did you end it the way you did? I mean.. Just one more line.. Ah!!

Anyway..

It was a wonderful Rakshabandhan one shot, Shikha!!!!!

Love you loads for writing this!!!!

Originally posted by: ShikhaKhushi

*bites her lip guiltily* Hum jaante hain ke you all want this to continue... I'm sorry guys but I cannot... I already have school on my back and sooo many FFs to update... I won't be able to...

Originally posted by: ShikhaKhushi

Haww!😲 You read it?!!!! Thank you Ji!!!😳

😆Hmm... Super cool hai! I have a brother from my tuitions too!

Thanks dear!

Originally posted by: Nimie207

Such a wonderful one..i thot u will write abt Arnav n Anjali,but u nvr fails to surprrise us.