Ray of sunshine - VIRMAN - SS - part 10

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Rachel19

@Rachel19

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Awesome update so emotional
Manvi was scared for diya
She's going through so much
Virat trying his best to be with her busy she won't talk to him
Finally she confessed what happend to her
And virat will find out that he life is still in danger
You are a fabulous writer I have no words for your writhing
I just love your stories
Please continue soon
Will be waiting for your next update

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

awesome! so much pain, numbness and useless ... very well written

I am so glad that Virat took the step and said his mind to her, I trilled that she told him everything.

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Disha

@daydreamer9

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#303

gaaah!!!!i'm gonna fail anyway.

why do u guys choose this day 2 update. i hv an xm in nxt 7 hrs.😭

it's great to see that manvi has finally opened up to him.what his maturity couldn't do...his stubbornness did the trick.yes one doesn't need sympathy,care,pity...all these things when he/she's completely broken.they need assurance.assurance that nothin has really changed.assurance that nothin will ever change between them n their loved one's.no matter what comes.

anu plz believe me whn i say i love u.i'm not good wid words or at xpressing feelings.i just never wanna stop readin what u write.❤️

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 12 years ago

#304

im speechless,
please manvi dont do this, dont give up , virat is there for you , so pleasee fight with him together for your love,

owwim dieing to see them happy together...

great work

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Anamta

@ShadowImbue

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

Loved it...Manvi's mental state is perfectly described...she cried without any reason couldn't sleep at nights all what she went through...will require considerable time to get recover emotionally...When she feared for her daughter within ten minutes..it was a protective mother who want to protect her kid...in her vulnerable state...she gained strength to get up for protecting her daughter she couldn't think about other possibilities...its difficult...its very difficult to forget...worst phase of life...she considered she can't be same Manvi whom Virat loved...she would never be...same Manvi...but still she was same Manvi...with her daughter who never let her think that she'as changed or she need any support or sympathy...once she let...and Manvi didn't want to displease her...circumstances matured Virat..and she could see that change...At times u need to be closer to the person...whom u want to give space..what Virat did was right...he finally told her how much he needed her...he want to listen...she finally spoke up..I really wish her emotional recovery is gradual...

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shaimah

@shaimah

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Awesome update
Its getting interesting
Excited for the next part
Continue soon and please do pm me!!

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pyaarkikahani

@pyaarkikahani

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#307

I am so hooked on this story can't wait for the next update.

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meghna325

@meghna325

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#308

You described Manvi's state so beautifully... it makes one realize the mental state of all those people who have gone through the similar torture. She felt so vulnerable when she did'nt see her daughter for 15 minutes it showed a mother's turmoil how she was desperate to protect her daughter. Loved how Virat put his thought across and told her that he needed her by his side... Can't wait to read more of this story...

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tanishalnk

@tanishalnk

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Omg...its so emotional... 😭
Virat's outburst is awesome. ...
I feel really sad for manvi bt virats out burst make her clear that nothing change btw them...
U r awesome 👏 ...don't feel lyk ki tumhari stories ka kabhi end ho...feels lyk read read nd read...
U r fab...