The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS

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Sona

@mistyrains

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#711

The song, its my all time favorites. And this chapter was touching, very sensitively written :)

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KBS

@oKBSo

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#712

oh shit pranab is having feelings for khushi

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bkamber

@bkamber

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Posted: 12 years ago

#713

Thanks for the teaser.
I am enticed.
Starting to feel better about this child marriage story.
Love your writing.
Have a good day.
😊

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addictedx53

@addictedx53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#714

Beautiful Jenny. This story is so poignant with its pauses, thoughts, & words. Arnav is so so careful about not hurting the growing up Khushi's feelings & opening up to the wonder of her personality!

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#715

OMG!!!!
Yeh ab Aranb ko gussa kyun ayaa Jenny?
Aisa kya kiya hamari Khushi par?
You know Wednesday is really far...
Eagerly waiting for the update.

Edited by sunitikapoor - 12 years ago

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shr1234

@shr1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#716

Now What? This is torturous. Sun, Mon, Tue and then Wed.. Hmm...

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#717

now wht happened??...

why arnab is soo angry...???????

plzz continue soon dear...

it was interesting one...

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#718

Though Arnab decided to be patient with his little wife, end of the day he is human and he will have his moments given the age difference and Khushi's "Chanchal" nature.