Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149

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Samyxx

@Samyxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Great start.. i like it..

Please continue...

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bhoomigowda

@bhoomigowda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

The story seems fresh and interesting. Good to read something different from the rest of the stories. With cricket [IPL] has back drop, the story is very promising. Waiting to see how the story unfolds. Loved the update.

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

awsome update

eagerly want to read more

thanks for pm

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Amrita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Just came across it... Im loving this ... Thank you for the PM

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Jenna

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

I am loving how this is shaping up.

Cant wait for more

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_disha_

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Haaww... when did u start this one !!😲

I was trolling and landed up here Bookmarked !

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Wow the first update was Amazing and superb, worth the wait.

So Arnav has got a temper and has been referred to anger management, wonder how the sessions will go.

I'm getting the feeling that his counsellor maybe Khushi, if so that shall be very interesting.

Loved the update it was a wonderful read,

Eagerly waiting to read the next part,

Thanks for the PM xx

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Wow what a start of a brilliant story in making.
Arnav has got anger issues but that journalist was out of order to bring his sister into anything but he needed to be a bit more calmer and less aggressive as media can blow things out if proportion.
Loved the first chapter and can't wait for the next one.
Thanks for the PM.

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Ah... the wait is over!

Really liked reading the first chapter and I know it for a fact that I'm really going to enjoy this story. It's very different.

Now, I'm not someone who sits through cricket matches but it fascinates me. And life of a cricketer, I would definitely like to read that! Actually, I'm so glad you came up with the idea 😃

So the star cricketer is having some bad days in the field and from the looks of it, bad days as well.

And boy he does have some temper issues!

Really looking forward to read what'll happen next! Eagerly waiting!!

Btw, I always...always wanted to read about the cricketer Arnav. Thank you thank you thank you 🤗