Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...'#2 *Author's Note* Pg50

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: AbhiyaMaaneet
Awesome Update...
Can't Wait 4 d Next Part...
Plzzz Update Soon...

Thanks a lot for commenting!

I am really glad you liked it.

Upcoming chapter- dhamakedaar update of 3 parts- 7 A,B and C. But update will be next week. But I promise to make it interesting😊

Originally posted by: Leki
I vl comment once i come out of the shock i got after reading this update...

OMG!

Theek hai, Leki...waiting eagerly for your comment😊

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: Shivi1997
Thnx god
at last they met
ariya met
i loved it
eagerly waiting 4 nxt update

Yes, they FINALLY met!!!😃

Abb aayega mazaa.

Thanks for commenting! Next update will be a looonnnggg one. In a week

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

loved the way u have portrayed arjuns POV
dustin seems to be a nice fellow
finally we will see the relevation of truth
would love to c a triangle btw arjun riya and a third person
might be fun ...

Thanks a lot for following the story. And for commenting😛

So you liked the portrayal of Arjun's state of mind, huh? Thanks.

Yes, finally the revelation of the truth. Abb things are going to get very messy, and interesting.

Love triangle? Nice idea. I will see what I can do😊

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

My 2500th post!!!😳

I am a DAZZLER...Whooppieee!!!🥳

4 saal baad akhir yahaan tak pahunch hii gayi😆

Now, over to Nakshatra's comment. Ahem, ahem.

Originally posted by: nakshatra92
most awaiting and the best part ... 👏 👏 👏
ARIYA officially met...
right from the beginning, commn 's POV , arjun's POV ...

transformation of arjun from arjun to super cop ACP Rawte... fab...

then the last part , just got a heart attack... was waiting for their meet but didnt expect like this...

want to know ETF's reaction , most importantly arjun's reaction on knowing about riya's mission...

one thing i forgot to tell you " you are a fantastic writer 👏 "

update soon... will be waiting for it...

Thanks a lot for commenting, my star😛

I worked very hard on Arjun's PoV...glad that it turned out well. 😃 Hope it lived up to your expectations.

Next chapter will have a lot of thrills- stay tuned. The real story starts from here.😉

Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: Kaval05
i was eagerly waiting for your update. When i read it i was looking for more. I just cant wait to read more. So Riya is finally meeting everyone. It will be very interesting. Update soon

Thanks a lot, Kaval. So sweet of you to say this.

I am happy that I could sustain your interest😊

Yes, Riya is FINALLY meeting everyone. Things will take a turn from now on. But for the better or for the worse?😉

Update next week, but a long one😃

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: Jorja
Super awesome update
Loveit
Cont soon

Aww, thanks a lot, Jorja!!!😊 Happy to see you here again.

Originally posted by: shah10
Wow.. Superb update
Love Arjun's pov

Thanks a lot, dear.

At this point, I'd like to express my appreciation for commenting so diligently. It really means a lot to me😊

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Awwsssmmmly awwsssmmm part
brillently written
can't wait to read more
plzz come back sooon
cont sooon
thnx 4 pm

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EkNoKiNashedi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: -Amri-

Hi Ri!!!😊 heyya miss writer😳

LOL at your version of the warning. So sweet of you😃

trust me i am so embarrassed right now...i was on high last night i guess, such a dramatic reply🤣😡
Awww...iss umar mein BP aur heart attack? 😆
sb apki kripa hain madam jee...i am booking a ICU room now ...koi bharosa nahi agle update mein zaroorat par jaye😆

Your comment shows how carefully you read the entire chapter. You got all the nuances and details right. You are surely one of my best readers, ever.

till now i used to get compliment that i give long replies and comment on all part of a update...best reader? aww thank u☺️

Abb Arjun kya karega- yeh jaanne ke liye aapko ek hafte tak intezaar karna padega. But one thing is certain- he is certainly angry But he is also trying hard to conceal it. What he will do with Riya is a story for another day😉

7 days? nahiii (hema malini style) 🤣 yeah he is...omg i am now scared for riya...will he kill her? what if whole ETF strangle her? omg🤣 what he will do? errr

And I am really glad that you liked the ending. Hope the suspense and the build up was good enough.

it was freaking awesome!!! told u na i just survived near heart attack😆 i am not so faint hearted u know...it was fabulous!!!
And I will obey your request for a full-on confrontation between Ariya in the next chapter. I can't believe i am saying this- NO CLIFFHANGER.

full confrontation??? gosh pls let me survive that update😆 no cliffhanger? yayyy🤣
Teen parts honge agle chapter ke. Aur usme woh sabb hoga jo aap chahti hein. Till then, take care:)
yes...buhahahhahahhhahahahhaa 😆😆😆
sayonara...hasta la vista😳😳

my replies @red

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abjeya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

omg. the end I did not expect. I thought that you would make riya and arjun meet after a few chapter but your surprise was really good. liked the way you portrayed arjun's emotions and defiance and riya's fear. please update soon and let the etf team know about riya's past.