ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 4 - COMPLETED - Page 88

Originally posted by: monasha

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Monasha, Thank you so much for wonderful feedback. Here goes my reaction reading your review!!!

Khushi woke up 5:30 in the morning only to try and bring old Arnie back, lovely.. Arnav's mothers description was nice.. she truly seems to be really devotional.. and Arnav got that habit of getting up early I guess.. I had never seen (read) Arnav gardening in this story, so he left his this hobby too? And he surely is not diabetic.. He was really good son, who used to help his mother in temple early in the morning..

Yes I have not mentioned too much details about Arnav in the earlier chapters as I want to disclose as the story demands. We will see gardening topic coming up soon in the story.

Even Kaka stopped Khushi to do Pooja, So that means no one did Pooja after Arnav's parents death, not even his uncle's family? Pooja items were of Gold and Silver!! Khushi prepared Arnav's favorite sweet, Kada Prasad (heard about this first time).. She's doing mostly the things which are related to Arnav, and the Aarti song, which he heard only from his mom..

Yes after his parents death no one did pooja in that house. Not sure abt uncle though😆😆 Kada Prashad (wheat pudding or sheera) is prepared mainly by Punjabis, I believe Sikhs specifically. They serve it on auspicious occasions esp in Gurdwara.

The dream was awesome, it shows how his family wanted to give his responsibility to Khushi and let them live their life happily on their own, I really hope Arnav take this message from them as soon as possible.. And they left from there, leaving them alone, That lead to break of Arnav's dream.. Dam he was crying when he woke up and first name he took was that of Khushi..

He really didn't like the idea that Khushi was singing the same Aarti song which his mother used to sing, he warned her to stop and even yelled at her, but she was as stubborn not to stop praying.. But she was really hurt to see the pain he was going through.. And the next set of words she took, even Arnav was shocked to react.. She truly wants to submit herself to him??

She is not sure of herself why she is so committed to change him; and she herself is learning about her own feelings from whatever the events are happening in the process. When she sang those lines, she is shocked that he came in her thoughts and she couldnt really relate the words and him. I should have explained it better in that chapter. I wrote that bit hurriedly as I was already late.

Arnav's condition is really making me cry, he's so confused now, he's getting what he want but is still confuse with the fact that one day he will lose it if he accept it.. Even when he crying for his great loss, he was also hurt to fact that Khushi was hurt yet again.. So he just decided to avoid her to avoid any further fight, lol even if thinks to do this will Khushi will anytime allow him to avoid her? Never..

Khushi couldn't control her-self and cried in her room, she just wanted to make any change in Arnav, but the change was on negative side, he didn't yell and showed his pain in anger but remained quite and left the house without even having breakfast.. just to avoid her..

To avoid her completely he kept himself busy in back to back meeting without having break.. Did he had his lunch at least?? I hope so😆😆😆 I wrote that chappy really in hurry and gosh how could I miss these details.And Khushi was Fuming in anger because of this.. And when she even called him, he avoided it by sending her text message.. And he messaged only because, he didn't wanted her to slap him in front of his client, and he actually smiled because of that.. (Changes are taking place),,

And Khushi's self-talk was really making me laugh, she doesn't even sound angry when she uses such statement showing that she's angry.. And she actually threatened him that she will come and disturb their meeting.. and he started imaging her doing so making him laugh and present him-self as an idiot in front of his clients..

The welcoming huge smile on Khushi's face must have been faded when Arnav after entering Khushi's cabin asked whether or not she had work.. And He just keep on cutting down the time limit of her new assignment given by him, btw if he had told her to give the report at 5 pm when he gave her time limit of 3hours, then why she submitted at 5pm when he again cut down the time limit to complete the work to 2hours??? They love irritating each other, don't they?? Funny lovely awesome couple

He was actually desperate to see her, love makes people to do unexpected things, and he was finding her crazy when he no less sometimes.. He still has the Mehendi photo with him?? I just want Khushi to have a glimpse at this photo, God Knows how many question she'll bombard on him, but I guess it won't happen anytime soon.. LOL, yeah we still have time for this :)

He's happy that their relation changed for better and all questions are cleared.. he really doesn't want share anything regarding his family to Khushi.. how will Khushi bring out of this shell??

He was actually excited to see his angry wife at 5pm, and was so disappointed to find Aman with the file which was supposed to submitted by Khushi,, Can't they just go and come together to and from office?? Why wasting so much fuel?? :P Shaanth balike, sabar ka phal meetha hota hain😆😆😆 Well Khushi really completed her work before time and warned him not to challenge her.. God she' so crazy and funny and I have to agree with Arnav.. hehe

After returning home both were ignoring each other and Khushi was expecting him to greet her, and when he didn't she says him as egoistic.. lol

When Kaka told him about the Prasad she made, he was actually getting impatient to taste it, as it was her first dish she made in his house.. but still he controlled him-self and to tease her more told her to carry the Prasad to his room, giving the excuse of some important call.. And Khushi's self-talk was awesome..

She waited and waited and she only became more restless and impatient.. God what must be Arnav doing in his room?? She wanted him to taste the dish she made.. And she finally went to give it to him.. And didn't say a word but just extended her hand for him to take it.. And he made her sit next to him.. And started eating without saying a word and also eyeing her bowl when she didn't start eating..

And when she said that she was full, he started grabbing her bowl and acting her share leading to snatching-of-the-bowl game.. And when she brought the prayer topic he again changed it while bringing up the bowl's topic.. And Khushi didn't push it further.. And while the snatching game continued he actually praised the dish, for which Khushi was waiting for so long..

And he again brought the topic of saying that he changed a lot.. And started telling him while making funny noises which he used to do while eating her handmade chocolate cake, which made Arnav to ask her to repeat so that he came admire her making expression and make fun of her..

And later he told her that he will never change back to Arnie, because of his loss.. that sweet was also made by last for him by his mother..?? And Khushi so wanted to share his pain with her.. And also told him that she will always be there with him, that made him surprise.. but he didn't wanted to lose her also so he just wanted to end the discussion.. And the discussion was well ended by Khushi asking him to hug her which he so lovingly did..

First time I commented so early I guess..

Thanks once again for your sweet words. Now looking forward to your feedback on next chapter.

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