ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 4 - COMPLETED - Page 101

Originally posted by: monasha

I'll comment in the evening most probably...
So Res... hehe

Un-Res

Amazing update

Khushi is getting punctual nowadays, waking up at early hours, but still she couldn't beat her mother-in-law.. Arnav sleeps diagonally, I pity Khushi, she will not get place to sleep after they start sharing the room, and I just hope Arnav doesn't push her from the bed.. That's why she thought "Why can't he buy a big bed? Isme bhi kanjoosgiri..?"

LOL how do you get these ideas of pushing people off the bed? Do you by any chance do that at home😆

She was so much expecting Arnav to attend the Pooja.. Even I'm having my doubts, why did Arnav didn't go for Jogging after Khushi entered his life again?? What it because all the stresses or something else???

You are right its because she entered his life and he was so occupied in her thoughts that he forgot his routine

Gayatri mantra really has its magic, it helps to make peace in its surrounding and so happened in Raizada Mansion, where the volcano didn't erupt when Arnav stepped in the house and heard the mantra playing in the background, he really felt at peace. He's changing a lot, not much anger been seen these days.. And he's also helping her to try all her efforts to make their life much better..

So the Breakfast for the day was Pooris and Aloo Bhaji, mm, my mouth became watery.. I'm fed up eating Fish over, want to try something veg..

Poori Aloo is my fav too but my dear hubby is too health conscious...😭

God, Arnav ate bread, butter and Jam, continuously for 8 years for breakfast only to keep him-self grounded, how can he such thing?? I can't eat same type of food, for 2-3 days.. And he gets cranky when he's hungry, btw when he doesn't get irritated??? (No offense please)

LOL you are right, har pal chidtha rehtha hain😆😆

So the idea to feed him something healthier to Arnav was Khushi's.. Not bad ha.. Pati ke dil ki raah pet se gujarti hai (Hmm I'm very bad in Hindi, so didn't know the dialogues properly..)

Khushi was so excited when she presented her and Kaka's efforts (i.e. Aloo Bhaji and Pooris) in front of Arnav, but Arnav roared at poor kaka, making Kaka scared and Khushi angry..

Khushi pounced on Arnav, I was just imaging her doing so must be so funny right, and Arnav actually leaned back.. And pointed out how much unhealthy that poori looked.. Khushi must be really annoyed with his, this behavior..

Khushi is unbelievable, how can she just give Arnav a wooden piece to eat?? She actually made it look like eatable..

And when Arnav got suspicious, she slapped his hand to stop the inspection.. And she literally threatened him.. And he actually took a bite of the food she kept for him.. thank god; he didn't hurt his teeth..

And after seeing her giggling he actually became Arnie, "Yaar" at least he's using these kinds of words with her now.. And he ran after her to grab her.. And caught her holding her waist..

Dam, he got asthma minor attack, and she knew him being asthma patient.. How many secrets are there to unfolded?? They remember about each other almost everything.. And Arnav must be so happy knowing the same.. She actually put her hands in his trousers pocket, lol.. how can she?? Good that Arnav stopped her, otherwise god knows what would have happened..

🤣🤣🤣

And Khushi became all shy, turning like a Pink princess..- I love this word you used :)

Wow! Arnav gave her the responsibility to cook him different breakfast every day of a week, now no more bread butter and jam for his lifetime.. And he was actually going to increase her punishment to month, just imagine it, 30 different dishes Khushi had to prepare per months.. And also to keep track that she didn't repeat the same..

And Khushi gave him punishment, ah so the fuel issue is solved.. no more wastage from now on.. Good girl Khushi.. at least you have brain to choose which one will reduce the wastage of money (1) Driving in same car (2) sleeping on small bed..

She was dancing in joy and her victory and then turned all shy and embarrassed when caught by him.. He just gave her 5 minutes to get ready and ate the remaining poori.. So no proper breakfast, all they eat is just half-half poori.. what's the use to be so rich and eat only half poori for breakfast???

Monasha you are hilarious girl. You are the only who questions the logic in the story, that too in love story...(sigh) You got point. I think by the time this FF ends, Arnav will turn into handsome skeleton from a man. I am not feeding the characters at all..😆😆😆

So Arnav changed his breakfast menu only because she made efforts to make changes and make their life better.. He's happy with this.. And our darling Khushi is all blushing remembering Arnav's touches and gazes.. when will she understand that he loves her??

Khushi felt that Arnav was angry, as he being quiet and Arnav took good advantage of it and tease her a lot.. And later praised her making her blush like a new bride.. but soon disappointed her saying about client meeting outside office..

About the summer collection design he pointed out saying the dresses are of full sleeves, Our Mr. naughty wants girls to expose, huh, Khushi you had got a good chance to beat him, but you just lost it.. And in explanation she spoke about the dresses are for mothers.. this two are more concerned about young girls and their mothers what about their grandmothers and grand grandmothers..? Unke baaren mein kaun sochega..??

LOL..I will leave that to you😆😆

Khushi was so happy with the thought that Arnav was checking her out, and she didn't leave that change to tease him.. but when he spoke about college days, she was so hopeful that he also remembered so much about her.. So that means Khushi take less than a guy's time to dress.. Not bad, time saver..

Sorry for late comment, was busy and lot lazy..

Update soon please, with big update..

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR

well Meg n i were discussing TDoTD on phone after the confession update n she was like she at present dont want to read light hearted updates and i assured her that the character ASR of ur story wont let you give us any lighthearted sorta updates...i mean there'll be goody goody and mischievous moments but his character and his past wont be so easy to forget...and thus we'll still get what we wanted...and thats what u gave in this update...he scolded her though he knows her intentions werent bad...but then again there was all tension and intense update alongwith their fights...

loved it thanks for pm :)

Originally posted by: chetna19

res

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Sorry dii I coudnt update my comment on last part...SORRY..last update ws really beautiful ..all things r perfect, like khushi giving her 100 percent to bring aol arnav back..perfect dii.. that dream where his parents says khushi is her with u.. u r nt all alone in this hole world than a Arti..awesome...everything is just perfet after that arnav enger... dii I always think that.. pura din ye dono jhagda kerte hain or raat ko ek dusre se sorry bolte hain ..lovely couple...21^st chapter bring little bit old arnav back ns all creadit goes to our khushi...

This update is just like love ws spread all over d environment...khushi 5:30 am uth gyii gr8..main toh 8:00 ya 8:30 am se phle uth jaunt oh meri mumma mera naam na change kr de...he he he...

Hehe Lucky you...I wake up by 5;30 because my little one doesnt sleep after that 😭

Isme bhi kanjoosgiri?

mtlab arnav or or kab kanjoosi kerta hain..arnav kanjoos h really...Dii ye dono subh uthte hi ek dusre k room me kyo dekhte hain ki samne wala persone utha hain ya nhi...

koi kaise continusly 8 years se bread butter se hi breakfast kr sakta hain... Han arnav kr sakta hain...he totally change himself..in each manner...

Dii I love aalu puri too...my fav too😆😆

Again a fight...why...ye dono shuruwat humesha fight se hi kyo kerte hain ..very bad...but this fight is nt for very long..good.

Khushi ka dimag bhot kaam kerta hain...he he he..

Their conversation is very cute they r started from ...

Ouchh...then

What if my teeth got knocked out?...then

Aur khush hota mera dil. You would have looked like an old man without those bunny teeth! ... wow dii this ws awesome.. here u show bublly khushi as well as cute arnav..

Arnav or khushi jab iss tarh fight kerte hain ...ye dono cute fight kerte hue utne hi aache lagte hain..jitna romance kerte hue...or ager dono sath sath ho toh maza hi aa jata hain..they both asking sorry to each other or khushi told arnav she wants sorry to him in 3 tyms...ha ha ha ha...

Nd after that he picked her up nd walk to her room nd locked d room... I ws thinking same as arnav... Any more closeness is just too dangerous for her...

I had hard time putting full stop to their romance.

Their conversation dii...

Say Sorry! ...I ws like khushi mt bolna...

I wont! ...that's like my girl...

Sochlo, Sorry ke bina chodoon ga nahi. ...toh chodne k liye bola kisne hain...ha ha ha..

Beautiful dii..i loved here cute romance from arnav side...in all this sense khushi is feeling shy nothing else ,...he he he...nd their demands...wow..they demanded each other awesome..

Dii u just perfectly ploted each nd every sense ...PERFECT...

Arnav change ho rha hain dhire dhire..this is because of khushi arnav k sath sath khushi bhi change hon rhihain..ab NK toh dur dur tak bhi nhi hain khushi k thoughts main...joh bhi kr rhi hain bas arnav k liye hi kr rhi hain...or humara purana arnav wapas a rha hain...

I noticed ...dii in this update arnav nt heart her by his words...arnav khushi pr trust bhi kerne laga hain..Fully..Like their official discussion.. he impressed with her work...

Arnav ko khushi k bare main sab kuch pta hi hoga because he is in love with her from last 9 years..but realize ab hi hua hain ...love u arnav...arnav is very innocent..kyo uske parents or usii sister uske sath nhi hain...

Hope soon khushi realized her love for him because dii ab intezaar nhi hota hain...

Intezaar kab tak hum karenge bhala...😆😆😆 Patience pays off

Hope things going to solve soon...

Beautiful update dii..

Take care of ur self nd ur daughter too...

We love u diii..so much...love u

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

res...
this is called timing...I just logged in...😃
well logging out again...😳 😳 will b back in 2 hours...

I am so sorry Di...for being this horribly late...an awesome update it is...loved it how she wake up so early...first thing she does is peeking into his room...the thing i love most is despite him going to jog to avoid the prayer,how he felt peace coming to his home...
then their breakfast...its so awesome...yesterday I read this part...then twice...then thrice...after logging out,I was still thinking of this...today too...this is so awesome...I just love their this Tom&Jerry fight...
then their giving punishment to each other...SUPERB...
their thinking of each other...awwee...
then in the car...his complimenting her...WOW...
I loved how he informed her about his meeting...and her telling him "Apna khayal rakhna"
then Arnav-Khushi work talk...the way she expressed her points...admirable...and his telling her that he will launch it directly if the client is not convienced...WOW...
And then again their cute chit-chat...Awwee...so sweet...
finally again her asking a question which made him out of words...
Such an adorable update...loved it so much...

Originally posted by: MeenuArshiCrazy

MEENU's Place😳

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Hi Deep Di...

I'm starting straight with the update as I am running out of time... Becuz U update just b4 my important Exams and I Res and then forget... So Here u Go

Arnav Sleeping Diagonally in Bed and Khushi Commenting about his Kanjusi

Good Lite start Di

OHHH Arnav escaped Pooja with his Jogging Bahana.. Nice way to Escape han

But bichari Khushi... is Screwed up becuz his sudden actions

Khushi's Frustration was worth watch

Khushi's prank... she made LAKDI KI SANDWICH

actually Good for Arnav

Arnav again Giving Task to Khushi

But again he forgets that he s talking to KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA SINGH RAIZADA

Khushi's Design, Her way of explaining them n need for Healthy women.. BEST..

Arnav deciding to Launch it under their Banner(For her Sake)

Hmmm Arnav Naughty Boy.. checks Khushi through Glass EH

But dont mess with your Fiesty Wife hey... she can recoganize you in seconds

DEep Di... your last Lines... again had a straight effect.. On me

Arnav Remembering College Days n Teasing Khushi...

Khushi asking Him if he remembers them.. With Hopeful EYES

The way Arnav looks at Khushi at the mention of College days and his Eyes SCREAMING THAT HE REMEMBERS EVERY MOMENT

Di... you just brought that emotion Beautifully

Sorry Deep Di.. actually i am running out of time.. ASSIGNMENTS TESTS n PRESENTATIONS... so this is what i could manage... i tried giving a long comment... but time dint help...I would have many things from the update.. but i read it completely... once this test get over i ll flood your pages.. For now Forgive this Bichari

Love you

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

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Dii i said u long ago make a ccur reader wil think us mad spamming ur thread but u didnt heard me 😡😡

I know I know baba. But no worries. Nobody objected 😃

Hmm so now she made a routine of waking up at 5.30 i liked it finally she is approaching towards arnavto make him arnie i liked her second step first was she left dat stupid nk and came to arnav

Why does she is thinking of king size bed she doesnt require it now 😆😆 she heself assumed dat he must getting ready for pooja lol dii khushi hamesha apne tarika se q sochti hai 😡😡

And finally her assumption went wrng he wasnt home only 😆😆 lolll i lover ur line wich u sed for khushi "Just when i think i knew him , he screws up my brain , putting me to square one" 👏👏 well its tough to be a raizada 😳😳

Yeah bechari,,abhi abhi samajh rahi hain!!!

Thodi brain arnav mein agyi he didnt hurted her dis tym wich was a new realsiation for him . I loved how he realised dat khushi wil do anythng to get the arnie back frm asr ❤️

Khush and her aloo puri 😆😆 I was really sad wen i read again of arnav past it was phase of his life wich i hate most to read and remember again😭😭 i seriously try to ignore dat part but at dis moment it was really needed ion the other hand khushi being unaware of his past made him wait unintentionally poor kaka being scolded but only to be stoopped by khushi haye i so lyk kkgsr for being equally challenging infrnt of asr ⭐️⭐️

WOODEN TABLE COASTER 😲😲 Really i mean she is nuts agar arnav ko teeth pain hojta toh 😆😆

Ufff dere lovely fight it was just perfect {madhuri style now dnt ask again were did she said dis 😆}

I will ask you! Where is this madhuri style coming from???I am trying to recollect all her movies but I dont get it. Are you referring to Hum Aapke Hain Kaun?😆

I love dere fighting romance dii it was a treat to read like dis ❤️

U knw dii dey r mad totally mad dey put cndition and in dat cndition also dey get to find more cndition 😲😲 { u get it na were i m saying to 😃😃}

(wink) parde mein rehnde dooo, parda na uthao..LOL

I love aranv pov dii it was so awesome to read he is chnging for her he is chnging his preferences for her and dat to wid out any so sweetly i knw dey fight but atlast arnav does dat only wat khushi want frm him to do 😎 😎

Bichara arnav kavi apni wife ko nai samjh payega🤢🤢 soorryy pagal wife😆😆

Dii u penned the last part too beautifully 👍🏼 Wish it ws true anav checing through glass abt her dressing up waisa it true he was checking her out it was just a mere line 😆😆

NO he was not checking her out. He did when he was in college but Khushi thought he is checking her out thru glass doors. If he did, dont you think I would have explained it in chappies😉

Doo reply to my last line dii

And arnav is just taking my breathe away everyday by his chnging behaviour d day is nt far wen asr bcmn back arnie

Btw dii i always frgt to say our relationship have chngd so much bfr wenever u used to reply u need to send pm for it but nw we r ur stalkers for reply 😎 😆

I know right. A sense of trust developed between us. I hope you liked the siggy...Let me know if you like it...I will remove my name and add minor change. But do confirm me if you like it or send me ur fav pics of his, I will come up with something

P.S I LOVE U DIII 🤗

P.P.S I LOVE UR SIGGY MORE DEN U MAKE ONE FR ME ALSO NA PLZZZ😳😳

Originally posted by: deepthiya

I can totally understand Meg's POV. This started off as intense but its going to lighter along the lines of rom-com. The previous FF I wrote is intense and emotional. I realized that I am better with intense compared to comedy. Thats why I took this FF as challenge to make it light hearted.

COnvey my wishes to Meg. Hope to see her in my next FF, which will be BTS Season 2 and I wanna make it more darker and intense than the first one. Not sure yet, but we will see how I will shape that up

Thanks for keeping me posted.