Smitar's: Loving Khushi #3 Part 9(1A,1B) Pg 106 22/8

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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+ 46

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

This was By Far.. The BEST chapter of any of the stories! 👏

*bow down* to you Smita! ❤️

This was Sheer Brilliance! 👏

The usage of words and the explanation of each and every incident was so breathtaking!

FLAWLESSNESS!!! ❤️

@Smita - You are a True GENIUS! 👏

@Rash - Thanks a ton for the PMs love.. ❤️ Have sent a mail to ur ID for the PMs! 😳

A BIG HUG TO BOTH OF YOU! 🤗

Loads of love, ❤️

Mrina

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

That was a heavy confession from arnav side:-)
awaiting eagerly khushi's reaction
do update soon

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

again why did you stop at this point...???

you expressed arnavz feelings so sooo well smita...

i imagined each sentence you wrote and each situation came infront of smoothly...

so wonderful dear...

plz continue super fast this time...plzzz

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annieK

@annieK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Smita , that was truly amazing ...so heartfelt , so very emotional as Arnav Singh Raizada finally unburdens his heart to his Khushi . Kudos!

Thanks for the pm @rashmi

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Arnav puts his words beautifully!

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

this was just awesome!!!!!!!!!

asr talking so much!!! 😲*thud! i'm faintwa* 😆

cont. asap

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IPKlover

@IPKlover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Oh God! Why did you stop there??? I so want to read further...it was going with such an amazing flow...Loved Arnav's honest confession! 😳

Edited by IPKlover - 12 years ago

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

This has to be the best confession of Arnav Singh Raizada I've ever come across!!
And I'm glad it's not over yet. There are more things that are going to be said.

Loved the way you incorporated the scenes into the confession..
His helplessness..
His insecurity that the walls he had established around himself would break down..
A man of few words, and whatever he says is completely truthful and Khushi knows. He's speaking from his heart 😳

It's a beautifully written update Smita!!
Looking forward to the next chapter! I want to see what his explanationforthe Diwali almost kiss would be.
And how Khushi will react. :)

Thanks for the PM Rashmi! :)