Smitar's: Loving Khushi #3 Part 9(1A,1B) Pg 106 22/8

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Wow, that was a amazing and mind blowing update, simply outstanding.

Loved the update from Arnav's point of view it was superb,

Love the way Arnav expressed and spoke about his journey with Khushi, with so much honesty and sincerity.

Throughout the speech, each time he mentioned a memory he held on too Khushi, so beautiful.

I'm loving Arnav's view on what he defines as love, you have done an amazing job.

This update has to be one of my favourite from the whole story, just beautiful.

I hope he does finish the kiss, which he did not complete on Diwali.

Can't wait for Arnav to finish of his view on his love for Khushi,

Absolutely loved the update, it was a wonderful read.

The update was written amazingly well,

Eager to read the next part,

Continue soon please and Thanks for the PM xx

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Swati Singhal

@swatim318

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#212

aarrrggghhh smita.. how cud u be soo cruel... aisi jagah pe update end kiya...😡

i was so much in the flow... and BAM the update ends.

well... what cud i do...

neways, i loved loved loved the part... i can imagine khushi's condition at tht moment.. even i had tears in my eyes for arnav..

but i really hope u update as fast as possible.. i m very curious to read further their conversation...

thanks for pm rashmi..

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Paramjit

@Paramjit

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Very nice update, loved it very much its like your read Arnav's mind for each and everything he ever did through the time he met Khushi. Oh my god it was like watching the whole show again in back flashes. Thanks for the pm, please update soon...

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

Awesome chapter

He is baring his heart out from the first meeting

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Loved the whole chapter, brilliantly written. Agree Arnav has done lots of damage but reading his heart felt recitation of past, I feel so sorry for him. Loved the way you wrote it, each line was just perfect. Such a heart wrenching update yet beautiful.

Thanks for the PM rashmi, your view for the last chapter was mind-blowing. It always forces me to think the whole chapter into new perspective, awesome!!