VIRMAN FF:You are my love PART 19 updated 6.11.13 - Page 56

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Awesome Teaser 😊 waiting for the romantic update😉
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If you are giving me such an awesome teaser, then I'm surely gonna bug you for an update!😃

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PART 13:

Hi my dear friends... Thank you for your likes and comments in my previous updates... Feeling very very happy on your comments. I am here with a new update...

After the whole day of shooting, Manvi returned home very tiredly... She walked barely inside the house without any expressions. She was not aware of herself... Seeing her arrival, Jeevika moved towards her...

"Manvi... you came? Ok fine... come let's have dinner" said this she dragged her slowly towards the dinning table where Viren and Virat were waiting for her already. Her gaze fell on Virat and she turned aside without able to face him after knowing the truth... Virat observed her and felt that she was affected by something and it was hurting her a lot... He can realize the pain in her eyes. It was now his duty to soothe her... make her relieve out from her pain... He went towards her...




"Manvi... what happened? How's your shooting today? Why are you looking very dull Manvi? Any thing wrong? Please, share it with me... I am here na?" said this he cupping her face. "I am fine Virat... nothing wrong..." she replied without seeing him and removed his palms from her cheeks. Virat holded her hands to stop her when she was about to go... "Then come and eat Manvi... See... We are waiting for you" he said concernedly. "I am not hungry di... thanks for waiting me" said this she got out his hold and left from there immediately.

Virat didn't expected this from her. A girl who's always fraternizing him and caring him with immense love is now trying to move away from him. Her pale face and frigid act making him intolerable. Moreover, her ignorance is piercing his heart... Viren and Jeevika consoled him as he is now worrying to the core...




"She was highly disturbed Virenji... Donno why? Do you remember, she went to attend a call in morning? Also, I came out to keep the plates in kitchen... While I return back, I saw her standing outside the room like hearing something and shocked... then she ran out from that place holding her mouth unable to control her sobs... She was damn worried from that time... I tried to ask her the reason. But she was not ready to blurt out anything... She will never share her pain with anyone... Have you talked anything wrong after we left..." asked Jeevika to both Viren and Virat.

Virat was confused yet clueless... But after thinking for a while, Viren said, "Haan..."

Both Virat and Jeevika were confused on his reply. "No Bhai... we have nothing spoken wrong... we just" said Virat confusedly.

"No Virat... Do you remember, I asked you whether you are showing fake love... and you stood still worriedly for a while without answering me..." asked Viren... Virat was now slowly remembering their conversation and started to think over it...

"Whether she had misunderstood that Bhai? But I said I love her the most" said Virat silently yet shockingly...

"I think she have took everything in a wrong way..." said this he ran towards their room without standing for a while...


When he entered their room, he saw her sitting silently closing her eyes... her lips were trembling... her hands were interwined together to control the shivering... He can clearly see her oscillatory mind and hurtfulness in her face. She opened her eyes slowly hearing his voice.

"Manvi... I wanna talk with you... please..." said Virat coming near her. "I am very tired Virat... we can talk later" said this she lied on the bed and covered herself with a blanket.

He was now worrying a lot seeing her state... But he was left with no more option than to lie besides her and sleep. He was surprised on her instint of not hurting him however he hurted her the most.



"Is it my punishment for hurting you these days... avoiding you these days? I really can't go through this punishment Manvi... your silence is killing me even more... Now I can understand how it hurts, when your beloved one avoids you when you needed them the most..." this mere thought driving senses worst. He knew she would never sleep in those thoughts.

After few minutes, he turned back to see her face... But to his shock, there was none... His worries are increasing and his eyes are yearning to see her... He is running to almost all the rooms of their house searching her... He felt like he is the sole reason behind her every pain... Finally, he got much relieved seeing her in the garden... But he felt like he lost his entire strength on seeing her breakdown... She sat by her knees and cried her heart out closing her face in her small palms...

She was startled on realizing his touch on her shoulders... She can't control her sobs... Virat moved and sat by his knees besides her. She hugged him immediately and cried even more in his arms... Virat caressed her hair softly without able to speak after seeing her state... She then stopped her sobs and saw his eyes silently unable to ask him anything... Her silence is now pinching his heart... "Why are being silent Manvi? Just slap me and ask why you did this Virat? Scold me damn it... Just open your mouth... Don't be stubborn... You have every rights on me..." shouted Virat cupping her face.



"What if I don't talk to you Virat? What if I ignore you? Why should you get hurt becoz of me?" said Manvi with tears continuously flowing from her eyes...

"Becoz I love you damn it... can't you understand my love?" he shouted again.

"Please don't use this word again Virat... If you shout, nothing becomes true... I am a foolish... can't differentiate one's love and fake..." she said.



"Oh... Manvi. You just heared half of our conversation... If you heared the entire one, you would be very happy... But it's just my fault and I need this punishment for my deeds... You know Manvi... I fell in love when the first time I saw you... Unfortunately, I said 'I LOVE YOU' pouring those colours on your cheeks in our first met... But I never thought you would become my life one day... In our second meet, I felt my love on you... You looked gorgeous on that stage. My heart gave you the first place in the winner's list without even my permission. I got stuck to you and your lavishing beauty...By then reality hits me... I thought whether I would fall for you and confess my love... besides being caught in your circle, I wished to ran away from my feelings... Each and every day, I am struggling without able to accept my feelings for you... And those feelings emerged as hatred towards you... I thought if I hurt you, then I can move away from you... All my love for you came out as hurt without my knowledge... But my formula didn't worked out... However I wish to go away from you, I reached few more steps nearby you... It's the destiny Manvi... You are my destiny... It was already decided... we can't go away from each other even though we wished... I would like to be a part of you... Your regression is killing me like hell. You don't need to sink in this lonliness when I am here for you to share everything... You should never hurt yourself Manvi... You are hurting yourself for my mistake... You didn't deserve this... YOU ARE MY LOVE " said this he completely poured out his feelings for her.



Manvi pulled him in embrace before he completed his words... Virat felt very happy... no no... beyond the happiness... he felt as he was flying in air... he tightened his grip on her waist. "I am sorry Virat" said this she again cried on his shoulders... He drifted her apart... wiping her tears and captured her lips in kiss... Her lushy lips were driving him even more crazy... His hands were continuously roaming around her back and pulling her more closer... Her heart-beats are increasing by every passing second. She realized his love... his need for her... their emotions were very strong as they never wanted to give up... Finally, Manvi pushed him and turned back with a smile and blush... they were breathing heavily... Virat was drooling her blush... He got completely lost in her dazzling smile.




He took her in his arms and moved towards their room...He made her sit on the bed... He again pecked her lips... Her lushious scent is pulling him towards her... He wanted to cherish those moments...




He kissed her almost all her face... He nuzzled her neck and moving towards her bossom... His act was very passionate and she submitted herself to him at that moment. Their desires were reaching to peak as every second... They were merged in love... He whispered, "I love you Manvi" in her ears and kissed them. They made love throughout the night and slept in each others embracement without knowing themselves...

So... that's it my dear buddies... Hope you'll enjoy this... Wish to hear your comments and doubts...

BYE BYE... TAKE CARE...🤗

Edited by madhuharini - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the upd8!!! thanks for not making maanvi cry for long!!! now i would really like to see how their relationship progresses!!!!! plz do upd8 soon!!!
Edited by abbay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Graet...awesome

no words for ur praise

u write beautifully...Loved it

loved their romantic scene...😳😳😳😳😳

Thanx 4 The PM

waiting for next part

Update soon sweety😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update finally he clear her Mu
and they become one update soon
next part
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jannat94

Graet...awesome

no words for ur praise

u write beautifully...Loved it

loved their romantic scene...😳

Thanx 4 The PM

waiting for next part

Update soon sweety😃



thank u so much Jannat...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

wow very nice update 😊

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