Khuda Hafiz .a Two Shot. KR

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Sadaf Khalid

@sadafarsha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Its awsum

Amazing

Zabardast

I luved it alooot really luved that part in which rey hugged her from waist and said i missed u it was the best emotional part of this os

Plzzz pdate next part sooon and do pm me

Thanx for the pm

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sanjana_D3

@sanjana_D3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Loved the concept

The part where they finally meet each other was fabulous :)

Thanks for the pm

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anjali

@anjali22

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

amazing one

loved it

update next part soon

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Arya
i absolutely loved this os...waiting for the next part

so sweet...and lovely

but am confused with the title khuda hafiz
Dnt tell me its a sad ending

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Wow!! Great OS hai 😃...

Rey went all the way to Dehradun , to find his BaarCutter , this is the asli wala LineCutter 👍🏼..

Woh usse mil bhi gai , itni asaani se , which of course is a Nice thing...

MUs bhi clear ho gai...

Ab toh dono saath saath bhi rehing 😉...

Loved it ❤️...

Song selected is Nice ..

Now 2 things which r irking me...

The title of this OS 'Khuda Hafiz' N the last line of the OS ...

What r u planning to do?

Plz continue soon...

N thanks for the pm 😊

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

wwoww...superb..

loved it..

thnks for the pm..:)

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Anisha Singhal

@AnnyLaughaholic

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

great!

n thanx for the pm! love this! found the first few lines similar to da show.. but it was really nyc! ;-p

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

the chapter was sweet and lovely os... u did not put taani part much...
but after reading the title i am confused is it a sad or some twist in the os...
look forward to read more... do continue soon and pm me