Khuda Hafiz .a Two Shot. KR - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
aahhh.. finally last part..

it was nice... 😃

all the flashbacks parts.. especially the omlette one was very cute... 😆

and then that Disc... aahhh.. old memories came back..

i knew Rey wud have come to Dehradun for this reason only.. hehee... 😃

all n all.. lovely update...

loved it...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its sooo cute!!!! 😃

All the flashbacks--- omelette making.. fake teasings... rey looks so adorable & kriya is definitely so loving n caring...🤗

Nothing can overpower kriya's sweetness... she made him talk to taani n say sorry... wow... my kiri ...👏

Part of family... good good... saari settlement ho hi gyi fir toh...😛

Wow... sexy saari... iraada kya hai kriya ka??? 😉

Yeah... take her back to mumbai... i wished the same...😊

I just love the way u mix sexyness+cuteness at one time... sachhi me...😎

Lolzzz... yahan nhi likhungi toh kya pm karungi... 😆

But... I totally loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Perfect ending...!!!!!👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update😊😊..loved the flashbacks scenes❤️..amazing...beautiful ending...and thanks for the pm😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful ending👏
loveedd ittt😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
The way his part started i thought kuch bura hone wala hai N as i knew 'Khuda Hafiz' means Good Bye , toh mujhe aur shak hua ...
But yahan toh baat he kuch aur thi 😆...

Hmm!! So iss 1 month mein dono kafi close agaye 😉...
Kria calling his father 'Papa' , Taani se bhi problems khatam karwai...
N Kria ne Rey ko 'Egg' bana-ne ki 'Try' bhi ki 😆...

*SHIRLESS WONDER ON MY KRIA"
This wali memory was Great 🤣...

Kria's sari was Sexy 😉...
Woh usme kafi Hot n Happening lag rahi hogi , issi liye Rey se control nai ho pa raha tha 😳...

But end he actually did confess his problem...
Sahi kiya Kria ne Rey ko slap kar k , inna dara k rakha tha...

A very Great ending it was 👍🏼...
Loved the story ❤️...
N thanks for the pm 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
Have read 2 parts back to back..
wonderful it was!
Luvd d flashbacks, specially d Omelette part was damn Cute..
Rey took Kria to d same club where they met for d 1st tym! I luvd this gesture..
Rey finally told her why he was there actually.. n Kria agreed instantly to go to Mumbai without any fuss! Then itz happily ended..
Luvd it a looottt <3
thnx for d pm :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update.. loved it.. just read whole os.. loved it.. d way u showed from d3 to KR union was great.. taani's irritation made rey determined to get kria back n searched her address n went to meet her.. kria's mom died:-( rey fel in love more for this matured kria n d way kria made him say sorry to taani was nice.. kria accepted rey's family as hers nice n cute.. loved it.. they went to d same club which made them together .. kria accepted going back to mumbai n they continued their romance which they left midway☺️ ☺️☺️☺️☺️ superb os..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update dear
Loved the the flashbacks a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsum update
i liked d part in which kria was teaching rey how to cook omelette nd our handsome hunk was lost in her princess
'shirtless wonder meri kria pe'- dis lyn was awsum
Der intimate scenes were lovely but rey felt guilty nd stopped der work nd finally he told kria d reason why he came there
nd dey continued der work.
It was beautiful. I just loved this os.
Thnxx for pm dear

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