TISHNAGI - RTMC FF LAST PART updated on Page-88 (21-9-2014) - Page 30

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta_3101


ohhh thnk god...i mean thnk u ^_^

my pleasure sweety
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Murat_Fan

Finally in dono namuno ne apni feelings confess to ki!!
Thanks for long update! 😊
Last update padhke to I was tensed kahi Veer Prachi se shadi na karle..but thank god Aisa nhi hua!!!
I had a doubt on Saksham when it was revealed that Veer was not the one!! Coz uske alava Aisa koi nhi kar sakta! 🤬
Hey...it's a request...next update pleaser thoda passionate and romantic dena as they have admitted their love!! ❤️
Let's see uski family ka kya reaction hota hai...I am happy for Veer's mom! 😃
I know it's too early to say but please update soon!! 😆

thank u sweety for such a sweet comment and will surly try to gave next by the night
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sammuratfanno1

Finally dono ne confess kar diya 😳

ab us saksham ki shamat aayegi 😡

Thank u so much itna long update ke liye 🤗

thanx dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART - 25 VEER embraced her tight. Her warmth soothing his all wounds and took away his all worries. Both are longing for this moment long back. He kissed on her forehead and cuddled her more. Rahul and Disha happy for both. They done their part. 'ahem ahem.. Dont you think guys this was not the right place.' Rahul teased them and also remind them of the place. Gradually she come out of his embrace. Her cheeks flushed furiously. 'dude ye sab to theek hai par ab ghar pe kya btayega?' Rahul get worried of the consequences. Ananya too get concious. 'Veer aaj to tumhari shadi thi na?tum yaha to firr?' Veer saw her paniced eyes and palmed her face. 'dont worry Anu pehle ghar chalte hai.' veer know what bothering her but he assured her that he always be with her so no need to worry at all. Both went to SM where Prachi is welcoming by the family members as a new bride. Ananya scared more. Veer entwined her hand. 'jab main tumhare sath hu to tume koi zarurat nahi hai darne ki.' he glance in her eyes. 'par Veer...',She doubted but Veer wont allow her to complete. He put his finger on her lips and shut her mouth. Veer dragged her inside and get shocked seeing Prachi there as a bride. 'stop there you both.' Aaditya cautioned both. Only Sakshi wants both all other glaring both. 'dad let me explain for once.' Veer asked for a chance but He wasnt in a mood. 'kya samjhaoge tum? Is ladki k liye ek nahi do do baar tumne na sirf humari balki Prachi k parents ka b mazak banaya hai. Kya soch k tum mandap chhod k bhage the wo b is ladki k liye jo tume kab ka chhod k ja chuki hai.' he scold him more. 'use bolne to deejiye.' Sakshi defends him. 'enogh Sakshi. Tumhare hi karan ye itna besharam ho gaya hai ki apne baap k samne sir utha k khada hai. Agr aaj Saksham Prachi ka hath nahi thamta to kitni bezati ho jati.' he revealed the truth,why all welcoming Prachi. The moment he left the venue,Saksham grab the chance to raise his value in eyes of Aaditya. He offers to get marry with her. Seeing no choice Prachi's father and his family got agreed and both get married. Prachi is fuming and seeking for revenge now from both. 'dad i know meri galti hai. Par us time samjhane ka waqt nahi tha. Anu shehar chhod k ja ra thi. Dad i love her.' Veer defends. 'ya you love her and she is fooling you.' Aaditya mocked. 'dad pls. Aap kuchh nahi jante. Anu ne wo sab isliye kiya taki main khush reh saku Prachi k sath.' Veer wont able to bear alligations against her. 'oh really then why she came back now. Veer she only love your status.' Aaditya wont agree on his any explainantion. 'dad she aint come. Main laya hu use wapis. Or waise b ek kagaz ka tukda hume alag nahi kar skta. Ananya meri patni thi hai or rahegi.' He said strongly. 'today you proved that you are not my son. Warna aise zuban nahi ladate wo b is ghatia ladki k liye.'in fit of anger he said those words which he really dont meant but it pierced his soul. 'theek hai dad. Apko nahi mana mujhe apna beta ma maniye lekin apko Ananya ko bura bolne ka koi haq nahi hai. Theek hai jab main is ghar ka beta hi nahi hu to mujhe yaha rehne ka koi haq nahi hai.' He told his decision strongly. And all turned stunned. 'anu will you come with me?' He asked glancing in her eyes. Ananya look in his eyes. 'jaha Veer wahi uski Ananya.' she strngthen his trust on ore. Her voice have such a confidence that boost him more. Both start moving from there. Sakshi pleads to Additya to stop both but he is hell angry on them so he dont answer back her pleads. She went to her son and pleads him. 'Veer stopit. Aise koi ghar chhodkar nahi jata. Ye tera ghar hai.' She is crying joining her hands in front of him. Veer shattred seeing his mother crying.'mom please dont weaken me. Mera rishta is ghar se toota hai apse nahi. Today dad said that i m not his son. But for me aap dono hi mere parents ho. I dont know ki mujhe janam dene wale kon hai or mujhe janaa bhi nahi hai. Kyuki mujhe zindagi dene wale aap ho. I know dad abi bahut gussa hai or yaha unki nazro k samne reh kar main unka guusa badana nahi chahta. Or waise b jis ghar me meri patni ki izzat nahi main waha nahi reh skta. Lekin mom aap to apne bete se milne aa skte ho na.' Veer's eyes to welled up and he hugged his mother last time before leaving the mansion. Except Sakshi no one having a pain of Veer. Veer left with Ananya followed by Rahul and Disha. 'dude ab kaha? I mean Ananya preg hai aise me tum kahi b nahi reh skte. She needs care. Aise karo dono mere ghar chalo.' Rahul offered. 'uski koi zarurat nahi hai. Mera ghar chhota zaroor hai but we will manage.' Ananya told her decision. 'your home?' Veer asked shockingly. 'kyu tum mere sath waha nahi rahoge?' she asked. 'nai aisi koi bat nahi. I will come with you.' he agreed with a smile. Veer instruct Rahul to drop Disha as its to late. Rahul took her and Veer moved with Ananya to her home.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago
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PART - 26




ITS almost 1:30 am when both reached to her house. Whole house is messy. She quickly start cleaning the scattred things and put them on their collect place. Veer saw her struggling and intrupts.


'stop it Ananya kya kar rai ho?'


'Veer sara ghar bikhra pada hai use sambhal rai hu or kya?' she mocked.


Veer pulled her to him and she lands on his torso. Her curves pressed against his hard chest. He stare in her oceaned eyes and settled her messy hairs behind her ears. His arm encircled her waist and he pulled her more leaving no space between them. In this closeness her harmones spoiling her thoughts. She shivered like a limp leaf in a wild wind. Her lips droodle feeling his sharp gaze there. Anticepatedly her eyes boe down,having no courage to meet his hysterical gaze. He enjoyed her melting like this in his arms. Veer stroke her cheeks with his knuckles and she clenched her eyes welcoming his all moments. Ananya fists his broad shoulders as frmly that her nails pirced in his skin even from his shirt. Veer leaned on her face and stroking her warm skin with his nose and kissed on jaw line.


'pehle apni bikhari hui zindagi sambhal le firr ye sab.' he whispered huskily in her ears while biting softly her earlobes. Ananya loosing herself to his demands. Her left hand moved upwards and fists unfists his hairs in friction of seconds. Veer moved his lips drifting her long neck to her hot mouth. He first rubbed slightly her lips. Just touching them. A shiver ran through her whole body and she felt week at her knees that she can fall even if he aint holding her tight. Veer suckled her lower lip softly and leave to glance her face. She is flushing with his magical touch. With each moment she aroused more. 'i love you ananya.' he confessed again and again while nibbling her lips ina swift moment. 'i love you too Veer.' with her every reply his hunger rosed sevral times. Soon his kisses turned untamed and demanding. His hand moved upwards gradually to her chest area. He palmed her left bossom and she gasped which gave him an oppurtanity to deepen their kiss. Veer stroke her hard bud with his thumb over her shirt. She moaned in his mouth. But Veer's urges had no stop. His tongue toyed with her and suck her saliva hungrily,deveouring each and every corner of her mouth. He is quenching his thurst of ages. A wave of pleasure surged through him. Their lips parted reluctantly,only when she felt need of oxygen and pain rosed in her abdomen. She is panting heavily and seems exhaust. Veer paniced and lifts her in his arm. He placed her on bed and brough water for her. She sip slowly slowly. He caressed her hairs. Ananya hold her abdomen as she feels some pain there. His eyes widened and he realize that she is 8 months pregnant and in this state might his aggression hurt their baby.


'are you ok Ananya? Main doc ko bulata hu.' he panicked.


Ananya clenched his wrist and stopped him. 'i am fine Veer. Dont worry its normal. Abi theek ho jayega.' she assured him but he scared.

Veer sat besides her and hugged her.'i am sorry Anu in my passion i forgot you are pregnant.' he is regretting.


'Veer why you so upset maine kaha na i am ok.' she vanishing his guilt feeling.


'wo jo bhi ho. Par abi tumhar 8 month start ho chuka hai. Aise me hum risk nahi le skte.' he hold her hands and glance in her eyes. 'dont take me wrong Anu but hum abi pas nahi aa skte. I dont wanna hurt you and baby.' Veer take a decision for their safty.


'i am sorry Veer.' she feels guilty of giving him pain again.


Veer kissed on her forehead and then on her knuckles. 'why? Ye baby hum dono ka hai na to sorry kisliye? Or anu dont forget ki you have complications so its better we wont risk.', Veer strengthen her with his love. Ananya raised herself and kissed on his jawline. He slipped besides her. 'now common sleep you need rest.' He commands her.


Both slept peacefully.


In SM:



Prachi is in Saksham's room. She changed already and boiling in anger. Sksham came and glance her gestures. 'ab itna gussa kar k fayeda?' he taunts.


'dont u dare come near me. I never accept u understood.' she cautioned him.


'malum hai. Or mujhe bhi koi shuk nahi tume chhune me. Maine to tumhari help ki hai.' she wont get him and stared blankly.'nai samjhi? Dekho hum dono ka dushman ek hi hai Ananaya and i am sure Veer ko ab to tum sabak seekhna chahogi.' he provoked her.


'click kya hai?' she asked straight forward.


'bta dunga aisi kya jaldi hai right now rest kar lo subah baat karenge.' he winked and leave the room.




NOTE:THIS PART IS SPLY ON THE REQ OF ''MURAT_FAN'' 😉
Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

thank u sweety for such a sweet comment and will surly try to gave next by the night


Wow!! Will be waiting!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 25

This was so emotional!!! 😭😭
Prachi got married to Saksham..well yeah she deserves it! Dono ek jaise hi hai!!😵

Ram Milayi Jodi🤣

Feeling bad for sakshi..!!😒

Veer and Ananya..in her house..wow...guess some amazing romantic moments are waiting for us..without any distractions!!!

Loved it..!!! 👍🏼

Edited by Murat_Fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Updated dear

Originally posted by: Murat_Fan


Wow!! Will be waiting!! :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG ek din main 4 UPDATE n tht tooo amazing one...thnk u sooo much dear...i just lov this ff n hatts off,u r veryyy talented... :* :*

tht 26 th part was tooo romantic *blush* n finally they left SM bt feeling bad for his mom :( bt happy to see tht veer-anu r alone i mean koi disturb karne k liye nai hai :p :p

i just lovd all the parts n waiting for nxt update..i know nxt update will b more amazing...richa dear take ur time n update coz we fans r crazy n we dont hav any work so alwayz ask for update only...i know its too difficult to write n posting here...u r awesome :* :* :* :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanx alot sweety :*

Originally posted by: shweta_3101

OMG ek din main 4 UPDATE n tht tooo amazing one...thnk u sooo much dear...i just lov this ff n hatts off,u r veryyy talented... :* :*

tht 26 th part was tooo romantic *blush* n finally they left SM bt feeling bad for his mom :( bt happy to see tht veer-anu r alone i mean koi disturb karne k liye nai hai :p :p

i just lovd all the parts n waiting for nxt update..i know nxt update will b more amazing...richa dear take ur time n update coz we fans r crazy n we dont hav any work so alwayz ask for update only...i know its too difficult to write n posting here...u r awesome :* :* :* :*

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