~Parchaiyan: Shadow of past~ RTMC FF *New Promo pg 17* - Page 12

Originally posted by: sammuratfanno1

di, jab mere is kachre se dimag thode bahut ideas aayenge na toh mein aap ko zarur dungi

thnku ji ideas dete rehna 🤗

Originally posted by: pranita1202

ye fist part

dhinka chika

humesha ki tarah ekdum jhakaas

i loved their parents

and jai😆

now our ray n khwaish . muaahhh

nazar naa lage dono ko

he calls her wishuuu. awww

aage kyaa hoga

me excited for flashback

Originally posted by: Poonamjayaswal

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!👏 I love reincarnation storiies!!!!!!! di plz continue vo mile the ff

Originally posted by: MyInspirationz

Nice update 😊

thnku guyz 😊

Originally posted by: chinuchinu

nice update khushi

u included two of my favs. i will call them prerna bajaj n mr. bajaj 😆 can't forget kasauti.. lolz

update it soon 😳

Originally posted by: __Sonali__

wow i liked the 1st part. It reminded me of K Street Pali hill...Friends and Children. Lets see what happens in Rajasthan

Waiting for the 2nd part. Write up soon...Lovely work Khushi.

thnku guyz 😊

Originally posted by: Nandini25

lovely update

love Ray and Khwaish

update soon.

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Nice update.

Originally posted by: nehamurat

Thanks for the pm. 😊

The banner and the theme both are great. 👏

Update soon. 😊

thnku guyz 😊

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

INTRO-

o woow!! ooohhh!! wwwaaaooohhh!!!!...


tuunntuunn... gagnum style...wowo gugnum style!!!... ((em doing dance))


mastt masst !!...

murat ki barish ho rhi yahan!!... o wow!!...


rayirth khwaish!!..

priyo and akeera (akber heera)...

iss barish mei really romantic feel h!!... lovely di... really thoughttful plot-... akber heera bhi h, priyo bhi... ancient time...

bhot kuch ghumm raha h mere dimag mei abhi- like kiski story kis era mei kaise hogi... kaise aap inhe connect keroge!!...

bhot expectation h meri iss ff se abhi-...

banner is beautiful... mugdha is royaly beautiful... n rajat is superb!!...

parchaayian!!- bhot hi suspicious sa story lagta h- bhot saara suspence h!!...

cmnting on next part too!!.. read below.

thnku rashu
u gave lovely name to akbar n heera

haan suspense to h
lets see main thik se define kar pati hu ya nhi 😳

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

o woo!!!~...
em deeply in love wid rayirth n khwaish!!.. it is just wwwaaaooowww!!!...


aapki imagination ko salaam!!...


rayirth n khwaish ki story rt ki bday party se shoro hoi h- bada hi sunder mahoraat nikal ah di-.. claps for samrin tooo!!...

thakraal mansion is massttt!!...

parents ko bhi bhot ache se choose kiya- nice choice...


and den- documentary on reincarnation- - kyaa super thrilling idea h????

akber was prithviraj's avtar!!-- bhot hi sunder fact h!!... its really thrilling n amazing fact- ...thnx arpi di for telling me dis... dil khush ho jata h iss fact se!!...


reincarnation ki tho devi h aap khushi di- itni saari stories on reincarnation...


rayirth n khwaish naam tho tho ache h... but i loved wishu name the most- kinna sweet sa naam h ye- wishu!!...


ray ki wish( desire) wishu!!...
kinna shona naam h ye!!... loved the chemistry b/w rt n wishu- very cute...

rayirth so dependent on wishu!!...😳...acha h- pehle se hi aapni patni ki aadat daal rha h!😳


chalo- tighten your seat belt- the flight is about to fly to rajasthan!!...

superthrilled di


jaldi se update dena pllzzz...



and em really sorry for late cmnting...

n yes thnku for calling me devi😆😛

tu humesha samjh jati h yaar
wishu is ray's desire actually

thnkuuu 🤗

Originally posted by: sheetal_cute

awesome :) :)

thnkuu

Originally posted by: Saru...

wer is the next update dear😳?

srry saru m bit busy bee to updates upar niche ho jati h 😳

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

REPLY FOR INTRO:

Hey Amor...

It was good to see another fan fic on Murat. M so glad that you started t his. You have incorporated both PRC and JA in this. I would love to see how this story unfolds. Thanks for the OM. Update soon.

Luv
Debs.

thnku debs

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

REPLY FOR PART 1:

Nice start... Jai is so possessive about his daughter.😆. Pata nahi bechare pe kya guzregi jab usay ye pata chalega ki uski beti Ray se pyaar karti hai. Loved the way you introduced the lead pairs and their nok jhonk. There name will take a little getting used to...😆.

Update soon. And do send me a pm when you update next.

Luv
Debs

lolz u can all them ray n wishu
easy rahega 😉

thnx