Arshi SS: Honeymoon In The Haunted Mansion *Completed* - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Oh god!!! Man that was actually scary!! Was that jake's body?? There actually are ghosts there??
I thought may be in the end we will get to know there were some miscreants who tried to make it look like a haunted mansion!! But figures suspended in the air and cabinet doors shutting and opening at their own accord i have no doubts left!!!
Imagine the shock arnav will get once he gets to see his supposed khushi's face!!
And now they dont even have a way out as main gate has been closed by the ghost!!
Very interesting!!!
Update soon pls!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Wowww !!
Its just so damn thrilling..
Its getting more n more spookier with each cahpter..!!
I'm so loving this.
Amazing dear.

A Big Thanks For The PM 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
brillant veggie...
it was a way too scary ...
if you post such scary stuff ... i hope i will not be alive to read the next update ...
anyways thanks for pm...
do continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
arnie that aint your wife for sure
so where is jake
and who is behind all this
gosh that were spooky for sure
so it was kate and not some ghost
and it seems kate and khushi are trapped in the kitchen
and no one can leave this place for sure
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
I'm quite scared
loved the update
thanks for the pm
Twinkle
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: GAURI29

whos there with arnav...i am toh scared...that too tht gost is sleeping with arnav...dint she fined other place...hehe as a ghost she should tht place is reserved for khushi ...lol


lol...i knoe...only khushi has da right to it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: kavyaarshi

excellent dear...👏👏

u scared the hell out of me


thnx :-D...dats wat i was going for...:-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: LuvArnavKhushi

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Creeepy! You write this so well I can easily imagine everything!
The ghost outside
The dripping blood
The body
The flickering lights and slamming doors
Aah tooo good!
And..omg, is the ghost sleeping with Arnav????😲

Really enjoying this story! You're doing a great job with it!👍🏼


awww...thnx soo much and yup its da ghost:-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
it was great and scary...update soon:-D!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG kushi and kate are trapped in the kitchen and other side arnav with that women...
looking forward to the next part

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